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-The '''Valcari system''', later called the '''Imperial system''', was an 11-planet system that contained the star [[Valcari]] and the imperial capital world of [[Valcaria]].
+The '''Valcari system''', later called the '''Imperial system''', is an 11-planet system that contains the star [[Valcari]] and the imperial capital world of [[Valcaria]].
-This system was vulnerable to meteor showers. One of them caused the loss of an orbital station. Another shower occurred soon after.
+This system is vulnerable to meteor showers. One of them caused the loss of an orbital station. Another shower occurred soon after.
 [[Category:Core systems]]
+[[Category:Valcari sector]]