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 *Eyes: Brown/Amber
 *Skin Tone:  Caucasian
-*Face: oval in shape with plenty of wrinkles.
+*Face: oval in shape
 *Build: slim and athletic
 *Identifying Marks: none
-*Clothing (Off-Duty): He tends to wear loose shirts and pants or robes.
+*Clothing (Off-Duty): She tends to wear loose long dresses or loose shirt and slacks that compliment her shape
-*Voice: slightly high pitched yet not offensive.
+*Voice: soft and pleasing
 *Handedness: left
 *Tattoos: None
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-Of average height and weight for her people who resemble terrans she has a slight ridge that runs from the top of her nose up into her hairline. She has an energetic spirit, enjoys life, laughs easily and usually seems to be much younger than she really is. Off duty she wears her hair down.
+She is of average height and weight for her people who resemble terrans and she has the slight ridge that runs from the top of her nose up into her hairline that all of her people do. She has an energetic spirit, enjoys life, laughs easily and usually seems to be much younger than she really is. Off duty she wears her hair down.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Family</h2>