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: '''Comment''': <s>Probably should be a page on it's own rather than a sub-page.</s> Good level of detail but needs to be copy-edited for typos, overuse of bold text & things like inter-wiki links. Just added a category and changed another. Not far off at the moment though. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt Cmdr. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-PhoenixC.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 17:22, 26 October 2008 (EDT) | : '''Comment''': <s>Probably should be a page on it's own rather than a sub-page.</s> Good level of detail but needs to be copy-edited for typos, overuse of bold text & things like inter-wiki links. Just added a category and changed another. Not far off at the moment though. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt Cmdr. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-PhoenixC.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 17:22, 26 October 2008 (EDT) | ||
: '''Comment''': Agreed -- all the bolding needs to go. Add a list at the bottom for the members, as well. :) --[[User:FltAdml. Wolf|Wolf]] /<sup>[[User talk:FltAdml. Wolf|talk page]]</sup> 01:07, 16 December 2008 (EST) | : '''Comment''': Agreed -- all the bolding needs to go. Add a list at the bottom for the members, as well. :) --[[User:FltAdml. Wolf|Wolf]] /<sup>[[User talk:FltAdml. Wolf|talk page]]</sup> 01:07, 16 December 2008 (EST) | ||
: '''Comment''': Likewise. I really like the article & think it's fun. No problem with the wiki links but the bold type all over the place does jar a bit. [[User:Hutch|Hutch]] 12:54, 17 January 2009 (EST) | |||
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