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 ===StarFleet Assessments and Records===
-: ''Full Article: [[/StarFleet Records|CHARACTER NAME StarFleet Records]]''
+'Imminent disaster! Insubordinate, arrogant, in immediate need of disciplinary action. Never in my career as Academy instructor have I met more lousy cadet. Potential threat to the safety of command, crew and operations. Keep under constant watch and control. Do not allow independent action. Whoever gets him, has my prayers.' -- Admiral Pierre La Salle, Academy Mentor.
-Introductory text about the character's StarFleet records. Should be at least 5-10 lines. You can give an abbreviated timeline below, if you so desire.
+'Brilliant and innovative tactician. His unorthodox questions and methods brought strong impression on whole compliment of command instructors. Loved by some, hated by others, Cadet Reven is an illustrious individual. This boy got's either most illustrious or worstly hideous destiny to fulfill. Take good care of him.' -- Commander Julius Aaron Tinkerbell, Command School Senior Instructor.
+'"Peachies"? I'll miss his parties.' -- Starfleet Academy Commandant.
 ===Timeline===