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 <nowiki>::</nowiki>Another tall Terran rises from the crowd to join her on the stage. Jessa smiles before stepping forward to greet him. ::
-'''Anassasi''': Ensign Sharpe. You have constantly worked to protect and
+'''Anassasi''': Ensign Sharpe. You have constantly worked to protect and guard this crew. Your efforts to ensure their safety have not gone unnoticed. It is a pleasure to here by promote you to the rank of Lieutenant Junior Grade.
-guard this crew. You're efforts to ensure their safety have not gone
-unnoticed. It is a pleasure to here by promote you to the rank of
-Lieutenant Junior Grade.
 <nowiki>::</nowiki>Placing the black half-pip on his collar, she takes a half-step back before giving him a congratulatory smile along with her hand. ::