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**** '''Mild oppose''': Now I've looked at it when not too busy, I can see a fair few typos too. Same reasons as Ehlanii. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 13:07, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | **** '''Mild oppose''': Now I've looked at it when not too busy, I can see a fair few typos too. Same reasons as Ehlanii. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 13:07, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
**'''Oppose''': There are numerous grammatical (and other) mistakes in the prose sections, most notably in the Character History, that make reading these passages clumsy at best. A featured article should be free from these difficulties. If these were cleared up, I would probably support the nomination, but right now I cannot in good conscience. [[User:EJVerde|Karynn Ehlanii]] 12:55, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | **'''Oppose''': There are numerous grammatical (and other) mistakes in the prose sections, most notably in the Character History, that make reading these passages clumsy at best. A featured article should be free from these difficulties. If these were cleared up, I would probably support the nomination, but right now I cannot in good conscience. [[User:EJVerde|Karynn Ehlanii]] 12:55, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
***'''Comment''': I'm concerned that there are several times when canon and semi-canon characters and ships are mentioned. For example, I wonder when Daniel would have had the chance to play piano for Lt. Cmdr. Data, particularly since Data died prior to Captain Riker assuming command of the USS Titan. I also wonder why, in direct contradiction to other pages on the Wiki, Cadet Wood served on the Titan. Additionally, some of the information on this page seems to be redundant, most notably in the Counselor's notes and the Rank History. It may be advisable to move the Rank History to a subpage. [[User:EJVerde|Karynn Ehlanii]] 23:44, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | |||
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