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* '''Support as nominator''': Believe this page is how a character page should be, relevant to the character, as well as providing enough historic and present information about the character to build a picture of them. As well as keeping track of the Independence's mission and what the character did to contribute on the mission. --[[User:Danielwood7|Danielwood7]] 16:08, 11 May 2008 (EDT) | * '''Support as nominator''': Believe this page is how a character page should be, relevant to the character, as well as providing enough historic and present information about the character to build a picture of them. As well as keeping track of the Independence's mission and what the character did to contribute on the mission. --[[User:Danielwood7|Danielwood7]] 16:08, 11 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
** '''<s>Comment</s>''': Still unsure about the readability of the headers in the right nav; blue on gray doesn't work too well. Also, at the bottom, the last few ranks aren't needed given they haven't been attained yet. Fix the nav at least, and I'll support. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 17:57, 11 May 2008 (EDT) | ** '''<s>Comment</s>''': Still unsure about the readability of the headers in the right nav; blue on gray doesn't work too well. Also, at the bottom, the last few ranks aren't needed given they haven't been attained yet. Fix the nav at least, and I'll support. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 17:57, 11 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
*** '''Support:''' following nav colour changes. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 18:17, 11 May 2008 (EDT) | *** '''<s>Support</s>:''' following nav colour changes. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 18:17, 11 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
**** '''Mild oppose''': Now I've looked at it when not too busy, I can see a fair few typos too. Same reasons as Ehlanii. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-wallace.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 13:07, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | |||
**'''Oppose''': There are numerous grammatical (and other) mistakes in the prose sections, most notably in the Character History, that make reading these passages clumsy at best. A featured article should be free from these difficulties. If these were cleared up, I would probably support the nomination, but right now I cannot in good conscience. [[User:EJVerde|Karynn Ehlanii]] 12:55, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | **'''Oppose''': There are numerous grammatical (and other) mistakes in the prose sections, most notably in the Character History, that make reading these passages clumsy at best. A featured article should be free from these difficulties. If these were cleared up, I would probably support the nomination, but right now I cannot in good conscience. [[User:EJVerde|Karynn Ehlanii]] 12:55, 12 May 2008 (EDT) | ||
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