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 Alana met this mysterious, handsome Trill man one trip back to Betazed. They shared hearty conversations and a mutual interest. Come to find out a little later, the man that she had dinner with and an enchanted walk under the blanket of Betazed stars, was the twin brother of her best friend, Idril Mar.
-She did not realize the irony of the situation until she met him during Idril's ritual to connect with previous hosts back on Trill. It was there the two gave in to their mutual attraction. He is the father of Alana's child, Keiran, which was the product of that spur of the moment tryst.
+She did not realize the irony of the situation until she met him during Idril's ritual to connect with previous hosts back on Trill. It was there the two gave in to their mutual attraction.
-Halla has a special place in the woman's heart. After the birth of their son, they have been sharing quarters and making a quasi-married life together.
+He is the father of Alana's child, Keiran, which was the product of that spur of the moment tryst. A daughter would follow years later, proving the relationship more than an affair but love for both.
+A commitment ceremony will be held on the Estates of the 13th House, but no date has been set.
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