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 <b>USS Eagle</b>
-Lt. Commander Falt, Commander DeVeau, Lt. Commanders Kendrick and Kettick, Lt. JR Strathmore, Ensings Harford and MacGillan are aboard USS Eagle to support Commodore Oddas' team and deploy a network of communication satellites in order to improve long distant communication in the Ring 42.
+Commander Falt, Commander DeVeau, Lt. Commanders Kendrick and Kettick, Lt. JG Strathmore, Ensigns Harford and MacGillan are aboard USS Eagle to support Commodore Oddas' team and deploy a network of communication satellites in order to improve long distance communication in the Ring 42.
 <b>Runabout USS Nulato</b>
-Commodore Oddas is leading a small team of officer to map interference frequencies in the Ring 42. As the runabout approaches a wide disturbed area, communications with the support ship become slower.
+Commodore Oddas is leading a small team of officers consisting of Drex, Vahin, Lennai, and Xiron to map interference frequencies in the Ring 42. As the runabout approaches a large anamoly, communications with the support ship become slower.
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