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-'''Lieutenant Junior Grade Doz Finch''' is an ebullient, upbeat, and action-oriented [[Human]], currently posted as an '''[[Engineering (Duty Post)|Engineer]]''' to the [[USS Gorkon]], the flagship of the [[Tyrellian Defence and Exploration Taskforce]]. Although a lot older than many of her other Human counterparts, her restlessness and inability to stay still for too long has enabled her to enjoy a long and colourful career within Starfleet. Often seen as the tea-guzzling life of the party, few would realise how deeply she grieves the loss of a loved one and the challenges she now faces in the aftermath of that.
+Lieutenant Junior Grade '''Doz Finch''' is an ebullient, upbeat, and action-oriented [[Human]], currently posted as an '''[[Engineering (Duty Post)|Engineer]]''' to the [[USS Gorkon]], the flagship of the [[Tyrellian Defence and Exploration Taskforce]].
+Notably energetic and a touch on the restless side, she enjoyed an adventurous career spanning over forty years and seven ships, mostly in maintenance roles. But when the tragic loss of her nearest and dearest friend [[Murve Norström|Murve Norström]] happened, everything changed. Often seen as the tea-guzzling life of the party, few would know of how deeply she grieves his death, and the challenges she now faces in the aftermath.
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