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 |'''In 239208 the [[Razor's Edge (Darwin-A)|USS Darwin made contact]] with an Ash'lie civilian named [[Lyna Namid]] on Brut III while in the system on a mission related to the Prometheus Incident.''' She had been abducted from her home on Ash'lie and suffered despicable abused at the hands of her Sicarian captors. They had intended to use her to gain knowledge about Ash'lie technology but their plans began to fall apart after their small ship crashed and Starfleet responded to their distress beacon.
-At first communication was problematic due to a lack of knowledge or previous contact with the species making this a unique first contact. Lyna was slow to trust, having started to develop a xenophobic attitude due to her experience with the Sicarians. The universal translator soon began to translate her ethereal native language allowing Starfleet officers to earn her trust and learn her story.
+At first communication was problematic due to the limited knowledge available in regards to her species and this made it a unique situation. Lyna was slow to trust, having started to develop a xenophobic attitude due to her experience with the Sicarians. The universal translator soon began to translate her ethereal native language allowing Starfleet officers to earn her trust and learn her story.
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