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 This star system is located at coordinates 14-13-06.
-It is in orbit of a class IV, type A4 (White) star called [[Waw-Yodh (Star)|Waw-Yodh]]. The other objects in this star system are
+It is in orbit of a class IV, type A4 (White) star called [[Waw-Yodh (Star)|Waw-Yodh]]. The other objects in this star system are:
-*1)an hot rock ball of a planet, it's orbit is approximately 43 million km, diameter of 1,035 km (647 miles).
+*1) A hot rocky ball of a planet, its orbit is approximately 43 million km, diameter of 1,035 km (647 miles).
-*2)a small gas giant, it's orbit is approximately 78 million km
+*2) A small gas giant, its orbit is approximately 78 million km
-*3)a medium gas giant, it's orbit is approximately 153 million km
+*3) A medium gas giant, its orbit is approximately 153 million km
-*4)a rock ball of a planet, it's orbit is approximately 342 million km, diameter of 4,469 km (2,793 miles).
+*4) A rocky ball of a planet, its orbit is approximately 342 million km, diameter of 4,469 km (2,793 miles).
 [[Category:Systems]]
 [[Category:Sigma Dorphus Sector]]