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So whos description to use? I usually post these from the Captains view point but then there's also an Admiral in this so...

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 Captain."
-From the olive wood box comes a small gold pip, which he pins, to
+::She watches as his fingers remove the gold pip, unfastening it from
-Anassasi's collar. Then stepping to the side he nods to her crew.
+the box. Slowly, his hand rises from the wooden box, the gold pip
+catching a beam of light from the small orb above them. Her eyes
+shift to his face, watching, as he concentrates on pinning the pip in
+place. She can feel his fingers on her collar, hear the pop of the
+pip through the fabric, hear the snap as the back attaches to the
+pip. A slow smile spreads across her face before the Admiral retreats
+a step.::
-Responses
+Anassasi: Thank you sir.
-Moving over to the bar, the Admiral retrieves a bottle, and returns
+::Moving over to the bar, the Admiral retrieves a bottle, and returns
 to the new Captain.