Samira Neathler
→Important style requirements: adding abbreviation for Commodore
09:36
+8
FltAdml. Wolf
Sentence case for headlines, not title case.
18:51
+155
typo
10:00
+1
Updating headline recommendations with information about tone.
18:00
+1,591
Grammar
23:53
+2
Some rewrites, clarifications, and the inclusion of longer quotes.
18:10
+5,147
Adding a couple more examples and clarifying that we need to stay away from writing that sounds sensational.
19:14
+1,167
Clarifying that you don't need to name every character that was involved in the plot in the last month.
18:40
+362
Past tense
00:17
+57
Fixing bullets.
17:27
−6
Creation
17:24
+11,492