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The Century Eagle has one mission: patrol the Neutral Zone and defend the Federation. Odin was appointed major, a rank higher than captain in the Marine Corps. He commands the Century Eagle and he is neither afraid nor ashamed of how he does it. He's a strong leader who shoots first and could care less about the question. All he cares about is that you, and everyone loyal to you is dead. | The Century Eagle has one mission: patrol the Neutral Zone and defend the Federation. Odin was appointed major, a rank higher than captain in the Marine Corps. He commands the Century Eagle and he is neither afraid nor ashamed of how he does it. He's a strong leader who shoots first and could care less about the question. All he cares about is that you, and everyone loyal to you is dead. | ||
== | ==Crew of the Century Eagle== | ||
'''Commander:''' Major Odin Nuell | |||
'''First oficer:''' Commander Tork (a Vulcan and Starfleet officer) | |||
'''Engineering chief:''' 2nd Lt. Raven McCloud (Odin's best and only friend) | |||
'''Medical chief:''' 2nd Lt. Jonathan Muller | |||
Ensign Manny (Human / engineering / Starfleet / male) | |||
1st Lt. Joser (Human / helm / male) | |||
1st Lt. Bingo (Human / security / male) | |||
W5 Letty (Bajoran / command / female) | |||
W3 Izzy (Orion / science / female) | |||
W3 Jo Jo (Andorian / medical / female) | |||
Lt. Cmdr. Aaron (Human / J.A.G. Officer / male) | |||
==Redirect adjectives to nouns== | ==Redirect adjectives to nouns== |
Revision as of 21:59, 22 August 2007
Naming pages properly is important, because naming them improperly makes it difficult to find pages, and also to create other pages which may have similar meanings. This page will talk some about why this is important, and also give some conventions for good naming. Enjoy.
Odin Nuell
Name / Rank: Major Odin Nuell
Hair: Dark brown [when it is not shaved off]. His hair is genetically nappy and frizzy and falling off.
Eyes: Brown
Mouth: Round with full pink lips
Weight: Approximately 176 pounds
Height: 5'8"
Build: Medium thin. Odin hits the gym whenever possible, but it's not a priority.
Voice / Way of talking: Calm and logical whenever possible. Odin is highly emotional and "gets off" on talking down to people and being racist.
Family: Alice Nuell, wife [died during the Dominion War]. Barbara Smith, ward [she is the daughter of Nuell's father and mother in-law who died during the Dominion War; he is raising her now but only on the condition that he doesn't adopt her]. Ra Nuell, older brother [Ra is a general in the Romulan military and Odin's rival; since Odin left the Romulan Star Empire to defect to the United Federation of Planets]. Brigadier General Campbell, mentor [helped Odin defect into the Federation and teach him the ways of the Federation]. First Lieutenant Raven McCloud, best friend [Raven was the best friend of Alice and part of the crew who found Odin when he defected to the Federation; she is the god-mother of Barbara].
Ethnic background: Odin is a Romulan from the planet Romulus. Two years after defecting to the Federation, Odin had surgery to make himself look Human. He had his records altered. Now, he is recognized as half Human / half Vulcan.
Schooling: Odin began schooling on Romulas and moved onto special Tal Shiar trainning. He then entered the Romulan military. Before becoming an officer, Odin defected to the Federation. He then entered Starfleet Academy. After graduating, he joined the Marines and graduated from the top of his boot camp at the top of his class. After becoming an officer, he was recruited to Black Ops. Between Black Ops and Tal Shiar, Odin Nuell is a master torturer and has been called into action more times than he's ever willing to admit. Odin Nuell is also a member of Section 31 and the request of his long time friend and mentor, Brigadier General Campbell.
Present occupation: Major in the United Federation of Planets Marine Corps
Past occupations: Marines officer, Section 31 operative, Romulan soldier and Tal Shiar operative.
Hobbies: Learning everything he can about everything he can.
Political preference: Odin is racist. He hates everyone. However, he is Republican because that's what his mentor is.
Likes: He likes being alone and watching his enemies in pain.
Dislikes: Being bothered by people and their lives.
Music: None. It's loud and annoying.
Books: Technical manuals, especially on flight since he always loved flying.
Food: Anything that's dead and cooked well done.
Sports: Armed and unarmed trainning.
Pet peeves: People who are alive
Fears / Phobias: Never having a family and not being able to find a way of adopting his ward without loosing her to the state. The fact that everyone will discover he is really a Romulan.
Favorite expression: None.
Character gestures: Talks with his hands.
Special childhood memory: Being recruited into the Tal Shiar because it was the first and only time his father said he was proud of him.
Where does this character live? Odin lives on board the Marines first starship, a Steamrunner class ship called the Century Eagle. However, his home on Earth,
What does he want? To end his term in the Marines and live a normal life on Earth with his ward.
What comflicts, problems or challenges might he face? Loosing his ward, not having a family, and always being called to do the "dirty work" of the Federation.
Some history
Much of Odin's history has never been revealed. The reason for this is for the safety and protection of Odin Nuell, the Romulan Star Empire and the United Federation of Planets. Also, his career as an agent of Tal'Shiar and the Federation's brance of the Marines. His covert / black-ops missions will never truely be revealed and that's what everyone involved is counting on.
As a Romulan, Odin was a military brat. His mother, Yram of Nuell was an ambassador. His father, Ra Nuell was an enlistee. His older brother, Ra Nuell, is currently a captain in the Romulan military and a strong supporter of Reunification. Ra, Odin's brother, has his own command and is incharge of the Ojari Project, an asteroid with a cloaked outpost built into it. The asteroid circles a dead system that is heavy on ore.
Odin has been raising his ward, Barbara Smith, since months after she was born. As part of his inheritance of her, he promised not to adopt her so Barbara would always have her father's name. Since then, Odin has secretly been plotting to over-ride this clause in the Smith will. Barbara's older sister was Alice Nuell, Odin's wife. She died before Barbara turned the age of one.
Though he loves the Federation, Odin Nuell tries to regain his honor in the eyes of the Romulan Star Empire, in the hopes of one day having the ban against him lifted. He desires to set foot on his home world once again.
While in the Federation, Odin when through multiple "mutations". He had to alter his appearance, surgically, to look like a Vulcan. His first couple of years was as a Vulcan. However, he was highly volitile and angry; thus his nick-name "the angry Vulcan". The truth of who Odin really was, was known only to his then fiance, Alice, and her best friend, Raven. The two of them were the ones who found Odin when he defected. After entering the Marines, and being banned from Vulcan because of his emotional outbursts, Odin had surgery to make him look Human. All Federation records of him have him as a half Human / half Vulcan.
U.S.S. Century Eagle NX 87631
The Century Eagle is the first starship the Marines owned. It was bought off of Starfleet. It is a white Steamrunner class starship that was re-fitted for serious war and battle. The hull was made stronger and re-inforced. The phaser banks were removed. Instead, turrets line the hull.
The Century Eagle has one mission: patrol the Neutral Zone and defend the Federation. Odin was appointed major, a rank higher than captain in the Marine Corps. He commands the Century Eagle and he is neither afraid nor ashamed of how he does it. He's a strong leader who shoots first and could care less about the question. All he cares about is that you, and everyone loyal to you is dead.
Crew of the Century Eagle
Commander: Major Odin Nuell First oficer: Commander Tork (a Vulcan and Starfleet officer) Engineering chief: 2nd Lt. Raven McCloud (Odin's best and only friend) Medical chief: 2nd Lt. Jonathan Muller Ensign Manny (Human / engineering / Starfleet / male) 1st Lt. Joser (Human / helm / male) 1st Lt. Bingo (Human / security / male) W5 Letty (Bajoran / command / female) W3 Izzy (Orion / science / female) W3 Jo Jo (Andorian / medical / female) Lt. Cmdr. Aaron (Human / J.A.G. Officer / male)
Redirect adjectives to nouns
Adjectives (such as democratic) should redirect to nouns (in this case, democracy).
Use gerund of verbs
Use the gerund of verbs (the -ing form in English) unless there is a more common form for a certain verb.
For example, an article on swimming is better than one on swim. The plain form of the verb can be a redirect to the gerund. Existence is an example of such a "more common noun form". (More common than "existing," of course.)
Use English words
Name your pages in English and place the native transliteration on the first line of the article unless the native form is more commonly used in English than the English form.
Use simple titles
Remember that a link is the title of the page it links to. Titles should be as simple as possible without being too general. For example, the page about jazz should simply be called "Jazz", not "Jazz music", because "jazz" does not refer to anything other than music, and the simpler title makes linking easier. Adding the word "music" is redundant. On the other hand, country music should be on a page called Country music because the word "country" has other referents besides the musical genre. If we ignore potential ambiguity, the ideal of simplicity can be at odds with the ideal of precision.
Use common names of persons and things
Use the most common name of a person or thing that does not conflict with the names of other people or things.
Here are some examples:
- George W. Bush (not "George Walker Bush")
- Bill Clinton (not "William Jefferson Clinton")
- Jimmy Carter (not "James Earl Carter, Jr.")
- Occam's Razor (not "Ockam's Razor")
Middle names should be avoided unless they are the most common form of a name (as in, say, "John Wilkes Booth").
Initials in names should each be followed by a period and a space; for example: "H. G. Wells".
Don't overdo it
In cases where the common name of a subject is misleading (For example: "tidal wave" would be a misleading title since these phenomena have nothing to do with tides), then it is sometimes reasonable to fall back on a well-accepted alternative ("tsunami", for example). Also, some terms are in common usage but are commonly regarded as offensive to large groups of people ("Eskimo" and "Mormon Church", for example). In those cases use widely known alternatives ("Inuit" and "Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-day Saints"). When in doubt, check a mainstream reference work.
This does not mean that we should avoid using widely known pseudonyms like "Mark Twain", "Marilyn Monroe", "Billy the Kid", or widely known common names of animals and other things. But it does mean that we need to temper common usage when the commonly used term is unreasonably misleading or commonly regarded as offensive to one or more groups of people.
Be precise when necessary
Please, do not write or put an article on a page with an ambiguously-named title as though that title had no other meanings. For example:
- Apollo -> Apollo program
- Nirvana -> Nirvana (band)
- Pipe -> smoking pipe
Prefer spelled-out phrases to acronyms
Avoid the use of acronyms in page naming unless the term you are naming is almost exclusively known only by its acronym and is widely known and used in that form ("laser", "radar", and "scuba" are good examples).
Avoid the definite article ("the") and the indefinite article ("a"/"an") at the beginning of the page name
Except in titles of works ("The Old Man and the Sea", "The Lady or the Tiger?", "A Clockwork Orange") or in official names ("The Hague"), avoid the definite ("the") and indefinite ("a"/"an") articles at the beginning of a page name. This applies even if the subject of the page is usually preceded by the definite article "the" in speech or writing: Thus, for example, "White House" is preferred over "The White House" and "Middle East" is preferred over "The Middle East".
Do not use an article name that suggests a hierarchy of articles
Since Transportation in Azerbaijan could just as well be considered a subdivision of Transport as of Azerbaijan, do not use a name like Azerbaijan/Transportation. Instead, use "Transportation in Azerbaijan", then categorize in "Transportation" and "Azerbaijan".
Be careful with special characters
Some special characters either cannot be used or can but cause problems. For example you should not use a piping character (|), an asterisk (*), an ampersand (&), a plus sign (+), curly braces ({}), or square braces ([]) in a name.