Talk:Jacen Fanel

My own comments to my work

Yes, this profile needs some more work. Trying not to be overpowering.

I took plenty of suggestions and advices from the crew such as cite where my inspirations are coming from sort of like a disclaimer.

The pictures will keep coming. I will most likely remove some of them in accordance to what is relevent and what isnt needed. Like too many pictures of Jacen poses is a bad thing, maybe more pics of what Gaia would look like and maybe just the ship pics of ships that actually has appeared in story so far.

Yes I know, something about Fanel seem a little too much. As I said before, I'll make changes, additions, and other things to make him a more suitable character.

What I try to do is create a character like Jacen and his background of something that Star Trek has never shown. This human warrior, this empire or sorts in the background. I mean we have the Federation, but we need something in this universe not the mirror universe that is like a human controled empire. So we got House Fanel

Now I appreciete comments and other helpful tips.

-Jacen