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Your request to view the Ixvapyans and Gambians
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It has you as a Deck Officer on the UPDS, is that any help? --[[User:Quinn|Quinn]] /<sup>[[User talk:Quinn|talk page]]</sup> 02:31, 20 January 2009 (EST) | It has you as a Deck Officer on the UPDS, is that any help? --[[User:Quinn|Quinn]] /<sup>[[User talk:Quinn|talk page]]</sup> 02:31, 20 January 2009 (EST) | ||
== Your request to view the Ixvapyans and Gambians == | |||
First of all, thanks for your invitation to me to view these pages. Both look very well structured and have a great design. I must use such a template for my Illumini as well, once I have the time. | |||
I especially like the Gambians page since it is filled with species information in great detail. I actually managed to get a great mental picture of the species, well done. The Ixvapyans page is still somewhat empty, but I have no fear this one will also be filled with the right information. | |||
If it is constructive criticism you require, there is one big point and one smaller one for you. Let's start with the bigger one shall we :-) When using a Wikipedia, one of its most used features are the blue links that refer to further information on a subject. i.e: 'The species [[Illumini]] are a race which are members of the [[ma:Federation|Federation]]'. When you type this, one can click onboth the Illumini and Federation part to get more Wiki info on those two subjects. You have not really used this function. If you want an example, look at my Illumini species profile, then you'll get the point. In your species text of the Gambians, there is for instance the text: 'They have existed within the FTU Core Worlds for as long as they can remember, always within the capacity of the service and when gathered, in their Assemble Crafts.' you could use this function to give people the ability to click on 'FTU Core Worlds' to look up what these are exactly. Do you understand what I mean? | |||
Second, but very small and I have no doubt you guys are already working on it, most people like to see a visual on the subject they are reading. That is why I used an image of a Illumini (actually a Iceman drawing I found on google), which gives an overall better picture of how exactly I want people to 'see' my species. | |||
But again... your pages look great. Actually, better organized then my own lol :-D | |||