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* '''Noteworthy SIMs''' | * '''Noteworthy SIMs''' | ||
* [[SIM: LtJG Msafiri Bakari: Uninvited Guests|"Uninvited Guests"]] - SD 238711.02 (Kadosh prevents her friend Msafiri Bakari from hurting an innocent tube grub mascot.) | * [[SIM: LtJG Msafiri Bakari: Uninvited Guests|"Uninvited Guests"]] - SD 238711.02 (Kadosh prevents her friend Msafiri Bakari from hurting an innocent tube grub mascot.) | ||
* [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/17921 | * [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/17921 "Prizes of the Vaadwaur"] - SD 238711.27 (During a riot on the station's promenade, Kadosh has a flashback to the Vaadwaur Occcupation.) | ||
* [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/17973 | * [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/17973 "Escape"] - SD 238712.07 (Kadosh decides she needs to get away from DS17, if only for a little while.) | ||
==USS ''Independence''== | ==USS ''Independence''== | ||
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When the ''Independence'' returned to DS17 thereafter, Kadosh was reunited with her fellow Vaadwaur occupation survivor Bakari, but Bakari's animosity towards the ''Independence'' stemming from the latter's accusations of sabotage by someone on DS17 created new friction between Bakari and Kadosh, which they eventually overcame. | When the ''Independence'' returned to DS17 thereafter, Kadosh was reunited with her fellow Vaadwaur occupation survivor Bakari, but Bakari's animosity towards the ''Independence'' stemming from the latter's accusations of sabotage by someone on DS17 created new friction between Bakari and Kadosh, which they eventually overcame. | ||
* '''Noteworthy SIMs''' | * '''Noteworthy SIMs''' | ||
* [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/18615 | * [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/18615 "Up, up, and away!"] - SD 238802.24 (Well, that's ''one'' way to get out of a messy situation.) | ||
* [[SIM: LtJG Ayelet Kadosh: The Many Causes of Tears|"The Many Causes of Tears"]] - SD 238803.07 (What begins as a warm reunion between close friends turns sour.) | * [[SIM: LtJG Ayelet Kadosh: The Many Causes of Tears|"The Many Causes of Tears"]] - SD 238803.07 (What begins as a warm reunion between close friends turns sour.) | ||
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''Ayelet Kadosh is a PNPC created by [[User:TZhou|the writer]] for Tenzin Zhou/Charles Sampi. Ayelet is now one of my favorite characters to write for and a major reason I eventually created a new main player character (PC). Ironic, then, that she was really meant to be only a minor side character for a mission-specific PNPC, namely [[Bakari, Msafiri|Msafiri Bakari]]. However, as often shown in simming, the best laid plans had best be flexible.'' | ''Ayelet Kadosh is a PNPC created by [[User:TZhou|the writer]] for Tenzin Zhou/Charles Sampi. Ayelet is now one of my favorite characters to write for and a major reason I eventually created a new main player character (PC). Ironic, then, that she was really meant to be only a minor side character for a mission-specific PNPC, namely [[Bakari, Msafiri|Msafiri Bakari]]. However, as often shown in simming, the best laid plans had best be flexible.'' | ||
''Although I enjoyed exploring Tenzin Zhou's "quiet sadness" regarding his tumultuous relationship with his wife and the aftermath of [[Jessop, Veralise|Veralise Jessop]]'s death, I realized that I had perhaps put too much angst in him. In short, it was becoming less fun to write for him. Sure, there was the occasional [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/18443 | ''Although I enjoyed exploring Tenzin Zhou's "quiet sadness" regarding his tumultuous relationship with his wife and the aftermath of [[Jessop, Veralise|Veralise Jessop]]'s death, I realized that I had perhaps put too much angst in him. In short, it was becoming less fun to write for him. Sure, there was the occasional [http://groups.yahoo.com/group/SB118-Independence/message/18443 occasional oddball moment], but in general, he had become so serious, that I needed a different outlet. Enter Msafiri. Writing a character who from the start didn't like the rest of the ''Independence'' crew immediately brought an interesting perspective to the SB118 universe I had been simming in for the past several months. However, Msafiri's temper needed a counterweight lest he become just a stock antagonistic non-villain (i.e. a jerk). Thus, I created a loyal friend for him in Ayelet. If readers felt she was a friendly, good, and optimistic character, then by extension, they would feel there must be something more to Msafiri since she considers him a close friend.'' | ||
''When the nature of the mission suddenly changed, taking the ''Independence'' away from DS17, I decided I didn't want to completely abandon the set of new characters I had created on the station. Thus, I had Ayelet join the ''Independence''. Something different happened though once I took away from DS17. She suddenly was the outsider, and I felt disappointed that she seemed to have lost the spirit I had originally intended for her. Part of that was perhaps the fault of her abduction by the FTU pirates, which at least initially seemed to place the character in a weak position. Still, I'm still pleased with how the story turned out, writing mainly with [[User:Eyas Wtine|the writer]] for W'tine/FTU pirate Avro Hawker.'' | ''When the nature of the mission suddenly changed, taking the ''Independence'' away from DS17, I decided I didn't want to completely abandon the set of new characters I had created on the station. Thus, I had Ayelet join the ''Independence''. Something different happened though once I took away from DS17. She suddenly was the outsider, and I felt disappointed that she seemed to have lost the spirit I had originally intended for her. Part of that was perhaps the fault of her abduction by the FTU pirates, which at least initially seemed to place the character in a weak position. Still, I'm still pleased with how the story turned out, writing mainly with [[User:Eyas Wtine|the writer]] for W'tine/FTU pirate Avro Hawker.'' | ||