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-Aventis Heights is the name of the Residential section of [[Nuova Eleganza]], situated with Canals to each side of it's three story buildings it's currently stocked with two-hundred apartments in varying sizes, each for varying degree's of cost.
+Aventis Heights is the name of the Residential section of [[Nuova Eleganza]], situated with Canals to each side of its three story buildings. It is currently stocked with two-hundred apartments in varying sizes, each for varying degrees of cost.
 =='''Apartments'''==
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 From fitted appliances through to the latest in entertainment technology, with comfortable furniture arranged bespoke for each new resident, new tenants can be assured that they will be receiving not only the best but also the most personal service imaginable.
-Within walking distance there is access to the plaza with it's stores and music and from there to either The Dungeon or one of the heavy use pedestrian transporters to whisk people away to other area's of the massive station.
+Within walking distance there is access to the plaza with its stores and music and from there to either The Dungeon or one of the heavy use pedestrian transporters to whisk people away to other area's of the massive station.
 =='''Cost to Buy/Rent (in Federation Credits)'''==