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 ! style="background:#ffffff;"  align="center" |<font color="yellow"> '''[[Tel-ar's PNPCs|PNPC - Cmdr. Tal Tel-ar]]'''
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 ==='''Pre-Starfleet Medical Records'''===
-She had the regular child hood ailments expected of a member of her species prior to her admittance to the Academy.
+She had the regular child hood ailments expected of a member of her species prior to her admittance to the Academy. However, due to a mandate by the Federation Council permitting the correction of what was termed "a genetic flaw that was bestowed upon their race by the Forebears", she has undergone genetic alteration to allow her to breathe without the use of a rebreather.
 ==='''Starfleet Medical Records'''===
 She has been fairly healthy so far.
 ==='''Physiological Profile'''===
-She tested well, with no phobias or other mental issues. She also deals well with stress and showed a remarkable ability to remain calm under extreme conditions, both in and out of a hospital environment.
+She tested well, with no phobias or other mental issues. She also deals well with stress. She tends to be very friendly and outgoing.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Professional History</h2>
 ==='''Academy Record'''===
-She graduated near the top of her class and was both active and co-operative with both fellow students and teachers.
+She placed in the top third of her class.
 ==='''Qualifications and Specialties'''===
-Fully qualified as a doctor with xeno-biology being a major.
+Fully qualified as a doctor with a specialty in unusual physiology.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">History</h2>
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 *age 18 – Entered Medical school.
 *age 22 – Recruited by Starfleet and sent to the Academy
-=='''Medical History'''==
-==='''Pre-Starfleet Medical Records'''===
-She had the regular child hood ailments. However, due to a mandate by the Federation Council permitting the correction of what was termed "a genetic flaw that was bestowed upon their race by the Forebears", she has undergone genetic alteration to allow her to breathe without the use of a rebreather.
-==='''Starfleet Medical Records'''===
-She has been fairly healthy so far.
-=='''Physiological Profile'''==
-She tested well, with no phobias or other mental issues. She also deals well with stress. She tends to be very friendly and outgoing.
-=='''Professional History'''==
-==='''Academy Record'''===
-She placed in the top third of her class.
-==='''Qualifications and Specialties'''===
-Fully qualified as a doctor with a specialty in unusual physiology.
 [[Category:Medical Officers]]