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 <h3 style="margin:0; background:#b2f4ff; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; border:1px solid #FFCC00; text-align:center; color:#000000; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Personal Achievements & Disappointments</h3>
-* Discovery of her first clues of a race she calls "The Archaic Ones".
+* Discovery of her first clues of a race she calls [[/Archaic Ones|"The Archaic Ones"]].
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:#b2f4ff; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; border:1px solid #FFCC00; text-align:center; color:#000000; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Family Information</h2>
-She does not know much about her family as she was ostracized and sent away when she was five. The reason being simply her hair and eye color. On Orion, the darker the hair and eyes the more "perfect" women were seen. Her blond hair and blue eyes were completely opposite.
+She does not know much about her family as she was ostracised and sent away when she was five. The reason being simply her hair and eye color. On Orion, the darker the hair and eyes the more "perfect" women were seen. Her blond hair and blue eyes were completely opposite.
 Her family became the streets she ran though people did take the time to give her food and clothing, but would never admit to it to anyone else.
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 : ''Full Article: [[/Personal history|Shedet Personal History]]''
-Shedet spent most of her childhood roaming the streets living with the gangs and using her wits to keep a head of trouble. She never truly joined any cartel, but made sure she had friends in everyone of them.
+Shedet was born in capital city of Orion and was expected to die early on because of her genetic structure. The young girl had been born with blue eyes and blond hair, an antithesis of an Orion woman. Though a civilized society, her parents only fed her what was alotted to her and rarely took care of her except what was required by law.
-Around the age of 15 she met a Gorn named [[Morg]] who was bringing freight in for the stardust cartel. He offered to take her with him to teach her a trade so she would not be forced to join a criminal organization or worse, become one of the many slaves that were sold around the galaxy.
+At the age of eight, she ran away from home and found refuge in the foreigner district with a missionary family who took her in and fed her until she was thirteen. Hearing that the Pattersons were planning on moving back to Earth, she assumed that they would be returning her to her family and so she again made a run for it. Shedet lived as a street runner with a small gang calling themselves the Rejected.
-For five years she stayed with him learning the merchant trade and fulfilling her love of searching ruins for treasure and lore. The home was great, but her wanderlust took control of her and she soon desired to see the galaxy and the ancient ruins rumored to exist far from known space.
+Shedet stayed with the gang for two years exploring most of the sprawling Capital City structures and this became an advantage, when the Rejected wound up on the wrong side of the law. Mass arrests across the city happened capturing many of her friends who had become family. Being one of the few brave enough to enter the lower subterrainian sewer channels, Shedet was able to avoid capture.
-Leaving Morg, Shedet toured the rim until she discovered the Archaic Ones and their Obsidian Singing Stone. The vision burned in to her mind made her want to solve the riddle that seemed to have been posed. After months of trying to figure out how, she decided her best course of action would be to join Star Fleet.
+Making her way to the nearby city of Tempesta, Shedet got herself a job as an exotic dancer for the tourist center. This period of her life, she felt was the easiest. The girl only had to dance for fifteen minutes and hour for an eight hour day. She was given twenty percent of the tips and a small salary. Her boss, Culdor Cretch was a Rodulan member of the Pharaoh Cartel. She remained as a dancer until she was nineteen when she saved up enough money to buy passage off of Orion.
-After surviving four years in the academy, she graduated as an Ensign and was stationed to Starbase 118.
+Already considering herself a seasoned adventurer, Shedet chose a life of adventure hiring herself on as a ship's hand aboard
+the Cartel ship ''Fame and Fortune''. She spent a year working with a man who only called himself Tinker. He taught her the tricks and work arounds to many of the civilian systems on the market.
+In the year aboard, she was able to learn much of her favorite trade. It came aburptly to an end when Federation police seized it for piracy. She escaped in the bilges and got off board when the ship was impounded. She joined a trader out of the base named [[Morg]] and spent the next four years pursuing her other passion of archeology.
+On discovering a race called the Archaic Ones, Shedet joined the Federation to open up more avenues to continue her research.
 <h3 style="margin:0; background:#b2f4ff; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; border:1px solid #FFCC00; text-align:center; color:#000000; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Timeline</h3>