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	::In addition to being unable to fly fighters, his request to return to the [[Independence-A]] in any capacity is personally denied by [[Riley, Sidney\|Sidney Riley]], a decision that ~~robs~~ him ~~of his home, his career, and his dignity~~.		::In addition to being unable to fly fighters, his request to return to the [[Independence-A]] in any capacity is personally denied by [[Riley, Sidney\|Sidney Riley]], a decision that causes him to become bitter about the whole experience.