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:Have the beginnings of a total rewrite on my user area; [[User:Salak/Ithassa]]. It'd remove the map but is pictureless at the moment. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-paladin.jpg|35px|USS Independence-A]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 20:54, 22 April 2008 (EDT) | :Have the beginnings of a total rewrite on my user area; [[User:Salak/Ithassa]]. It'd remove the map but is pictureless at the moment. - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-paladin.jpg|35px|USS Independence-A]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 20:54, 22 April 2008 (EDT) | ||
:: Let's wait until the re-write is finished, then. --[[User:FltAdml. Wolf|Wolf]] /<sup>[[User talk:FltAdml. Wolf|talk page]]</sup> 21:05, 22 April 2008 (EDT) | :: Let's wait until the re-write is finished, then. --[[User:FltAdml. Wolf|Wolf]] /<sup>[[User talk:FltAdml. Wolf|talk page]]</sup> 21:05, 22 April 2008 (EDT) | ||
== Rewrite Notes == | |||
I've got at least another paragraph that hasn't been finished yet. With regards to the history of Starfleets exploration of the region, the dates were given in the old version, and the dates of the conflicts matched so I thought it would add weight to the "redeployment" info, and why Starfleet didn't return any sooner. I'm hoping this is a better structured, better written version of what was here before, and that it provides a good insight into the Region's history and politics. Please flag up any errors :) - [[User:Salak|<font color="maroon">Lt. Salak</font>]][[Image:Nav-PhoenixC.jpg|30px|USS Tiger]]<sup><i>[[User talk:Salak|Talk]]</i></sup> 09:45, 18 June 2008 (EDT) | |||