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 =Basic Information=
-*Current Rank: Leutenant
+*Current Rank: Lieutenant
 *Duty Post: Chief Science Officer
 *Current Vessel:  Star Base 118
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 =Family History=
-*Mother: Namoi Hilzarie Head of Phycology at University of Betazed Currently Regient of the 7th House.
+*Mother: Namoi Hilzarie, Head of Psychology, University of Betazed. Currently Regient of the 7th House.
-*Father: Altigan Hilzarie President University of Betazed Deceased
+*Father: Altigan Hilzarie, President, University of Betazed, Deceased
-*Siblings: Kayleigh Hilzarie age 21 Nondi Hilzarie age 12
+*Siblings: Kayleigh Hilzarie, age 21, Nondi Hilzarie, age 12
 *Spouse: Captain Rocar Drawoh Hilzarie
-*Children: Xan & Cheliz Hilzarie Twins age 3 (they have the appearance and inteligence of terran 9 year olds)
+*Children: Xan & Cheliz Hilzarie, Twins, age 3 (they have the appearance and intelligence of terran 9 year olds)
 =Personal History=
-As the fist daughter of her father Gwen is the heir the the 7th house of Betazed. Her Mother and Father enjoyed an iylic marage and Gwen never wanted for anything. Her father is head of the University of Betazed while her mother heads up the phycology department at the University. As a child Gwen found herself facinated with xenobiology and longed to join Starfeet to put her intrest to good use. She graduated from UB second in her class and attended John Hopkins Medical School on Earth where she grauated with high honors with an MD and a PhD in phycology before attending the Acdemy to become a starfleet officer. A powerful telipath Gwen spends a good deal of time using Vulcan meditation to clear in mind, a nessesity when living amoung so many humans. These techniques were taught to her by her childhood friend T'Lara who is the ex-wife of Fleet Captain Herbron.
+As the fist daughter of her father Gwen is the heir to the 7th house of Betazed. Her Mother and Father enjoyed an idylic marriage and Gwen never wanted for anything. Her father is head of the University of Betazed while her mother heads up the psychology department at the University. As a child Gwen found herself facinated with xenobiology and longed to join Starfeet to put her interest to good use. She graduated from UB second in her class and attended John Hopkins Medical School on Earth where she graduated with high honors with an MD and a Ph.D. in psychology before attending the Academy to become a starfleet officer. A powerful telepath, Gwen spends a good deal of time using Vulcan meditation to clear in mind, a necessity when living among so many humans. These techniques were taught to her by her childhood friend T'Lara who is the ex-wife of Fleet Captain Herbron.
-Telepahtic Rating: T-5, E-5.
+Telepathic Rating: T-5, E-5.
 Gwendalyn suffered the loss of her beloved father Altigan in
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 Gwendalyn Married Commander Rocar Drawoh Hilzarie in ????
-Gwendalyn has gave birth to Twins Xan Hilzarie Named for Fleet Captian Xan Herbon and Cheliz Hilzarie (Che for Short) named for Captian Cheliz Dacht who had reciently passed on before her Che's birth in ????
+Gwendalyn gave birth to Twins, Xan Hilzarie, named for Fleet Captain Xan Herbon and Cheliz Hilzarie (Che for Short), named for Captain Cheliz Dacht who had recently passed on before Che's birth in ????
 =Professional History=
-Gwendalyn entered the academy after spending several years traveling the Galaxy learing about the various speicies that populate the Alpha and Beta Quadrants she keeps an extensive data base with medical information given to her in confidance by various species and there fore not in the standard medical database.
+Gwendalyn entered the academy after spending several years traveling the Galaxy learning about the various species that populate the Alpha and Beta Quadrants. She keeps an extensive data base with medical information given to her in confidance by various species and therefore not in the standard medical database.
-She entered the academy and after graduation was assigned to SB 118 as a medical officer. Shortly after her arrival there was an out break of Naeveus which through the efforts of the medical staff was contained.
+She entered the academy and after graduation was assigned to SB 118 as a medical officer. Shortly after her arrival there was an outbreak of Naeveus which, through the efforts of the medical staff was contained.
-She was assigned to the USS Tiger temporarly and upon her arrival back to the base remebered nothing of her trip.
+She was assigned to the USS Tiger temporarily and upon her arrival back to the base remembered nothing of her trip.
 She was promoted to Lt.Jg. and given the Councelor position.
-Promoted to Full Leutentant.
+Promoted to Full Lieutenant.
 Promoted to Lt. Commander
-After being assigned to the Embassy Gwen was offered a Administrative position in charge of Personel and Diplomacy.
+After being assigned to the Embassy Gwen was offered an Administrative position in charge of Personnel and Diplomacy.
 Gwen was reassigned back to the Councelors position and held it for over a year.
-Gwen has reciently been given the CMO post at the Embassy.
+Gwen has recently been given the CMO post at the Embassy.
-Transfered to The Uss Constitution with the rest of the senior Staff as CMO
+Transfered to The USS Constitution with the rest of the senior Staff as CMO
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 =Notes=
-Likes: Chocolate, speaking telipathicly, xenobiology and biochemisty. Music, a talented singer. Spending time with her twins and her husband. Dislikes: Weapons of any kind, telpathic noise, heights.
+Likes: Chocolate, speaking telepathicly, xenobiology and biochemisty. Music, a talented singer. Spending time with her twins and her husband. Dislikes: Weapons of any kind, telepathic noise, heights.
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