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Correct name. Updated Family and Personal History.

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-Lieutenant (JG) '''William Asita Tindall''' is currently assigned as Security Officer at the [[Embassy of Duronis II|Duronis II Embassy]] and the [[USS Thunder]].
+Lieutenant (JG) '''William "Willie" Tindall''' is currently assigned as Security Officer at the [[Embassy of Duronis II|Duronis II Embassy]] and the [[USS Thunder]].
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:#800000; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; border:1px solid #F0E68C; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">PERSONAL INFORMATION</h2>
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 ====Interests====
-William also follows the Tindall family tradition of pranks on certain holidays. Willie loves history, he worked on his fanily tree with his father. Finding various family members in various miltary services from all over the previous century. Most served in the  navy but the odd few served in the army.
+Willie follows the Tindall family tradition of pranks on certain holidays. Willie loves history, and he worked on his fanily tree with his father, finding various family members in various miltary services from all over the previous century. Most served in the  navy, but the odd few served in the army.
 Willie is loyal in a crisis but can sometimes clash with authority due to his love of pranks or minor breaches of the regulations.
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 ===Family===
-* '''Marital Status:''' Single
+* '''Marital Status:''' Married to [[Tindall,Tess|Tess Tindall]]
 * '''Siblings:''' 8 brothers & sisters
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 ===Personal History===
-William is a Starfleet brat. He was born on the USS Authority and is the youngest of triplets: Laskmi, Patrick and William. When his father was transferred to the Bruian outpost the fanmily settled in a large house called 'Bren Eurst' Willie: as he is known by his friends. His siblings come in a set of twins and a quad. the Tindall tribe has all followed their parents into Starfleet.
+Willie is a Starfleet brat. He was born on the USS Authority and is the youngest of triplets: Laskmi, Patrick and Willie. When his father was transferred to the Bruian Outpost, the fanmily settled into a large house called 'Bren Eurst'. His siblings came in a set of twins and quadruplets. The 'Tindall Tribe' have all followed their parents into Starfleet.
-William's father was in Security. His mother is still a doctor. Willie had a rich cutural upbringing. His Klingon godmother made all the children members of the Chennah household and Sita taught the children about her Indain background. Willie finally moved to Earth to complete his final year in high school. During his time at the Academy William majored in security with a minor in tactial.
+Willie's father worked in Security, and his mother is a doctor. Willie had a rich cutural upbringing. His Klingon godmother made all the children members of the Chennah household, and Sita, Willie's mother, taught the children about her Indian background. Willie finally moved to Earth to complete his final year in high school. During his time at the Academy, Willie majored in Security with a minor in Tactial.
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 ===Education===