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-'''Doreen Finch''', known to most as Doz, is a lively, hands-on and occasionally facetious Human, currently posted as an Engineering Officer to the [[USS Gorkon]], the flagship of the [[Tyrellian Defence and Exploration Taskforce]].
+'''Doreen Finch''', most commonly known as Doz, is a lively, hands-on and occasionally facetious Human, currently posted as an Engineering Officer to the [[USS Gorkon]], the flagship of the [[Tyrellian Defence and Exploration Taskforce]].
-She started her career as an enlisted crewman, and worked alongside a squadron of all-male friends across the two major quadrants. During her time aboard the ''USS Barrington'' and the ''USS Marigold'', it was often suggested that she should commission to the higher ranks; she preferred the 'lower decks', however, and always rebuffed the idea.
+After completing a course at the Martian Technical Services Academy, qualifying as a Maintenance Engineer, she and a squadron of all-male friends began their careers as Starfleet Enlisted Personnel, with her own first Tour of Duty being aboard the USS Bonestell with her confidant, Bob Murphy.
-This all changed however with the death of her closest friend and confidant Bob Murphy; this profound loss caused her to utterly lose her emotional footing, and acted as the catalyst she needed to pursue a furtherance as ''Ensign'', making her an older starting and therefore non-traditional officer.
+In her Chief Petty Officer years, it was often suggested by higher ranking officers that she commissioned as one herself. However Finch regularly rebuffed the suggestion, preferring her life ''"on the lower decks"''.
+This all changed however with the death of Murphy, who she had reunited with aboard the ''USS Marigold''; this profound loss caused her to utterly lose her emotional footing, and acted as the catalyst she needed to pursue a furtherance as ''Ensign'', making her an older starting and therefore non-traditional officer.