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 During a SAR mission in 2381 Makal was exposed to an unknown alien device. The device not only created a duplicate Makal, but restored Makal's eyesight completely. The specifics of this event are still classified; however it is known that Makal’s duplicate died during the destruction of the USS Vespa, giving his life in order to help what crew he could escape.
-The events of the mission in 2381 saw another change in Makal. He both became even more religious and less disciplined in his service to Starfleet. Taking his Commander's test in the same year, Makal transferred to the USS Columbia under the command of Captain Avatar. Unfortunately, Maka's transformation distracted him too much from his duties, and he requested a diplomatic position on Bajor.
+The events of the mission in 2381 saw another change in Makal. He both became even more religious and less disciplined in his service to Starfleet. Taking his Commander's test in the same year, Makal transferred to the USS Columbia under the command of Captain Avatar. Unfortunately, Makal's transformation distracted him too much from his duties, and he requested a diplomatic position on Bajor.
 However, finding the position of a diplomatic aide extremely infuriating, Makal returned to the USS Columbia. Receiving a warm welcome on his return, Makal none the less got into an altercation with his friend, Captain Avatar. The result of this altercation saw Makal demoted to the rank of Lieutenant, and his subsequent resignation from Starfleet.
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 Makal was barely able to salvage the diplomatic situation before two Hirogen hunters attacked both his, and Lieutenant Commander Jaxx's away teams. Both parties suffered heavy injuries, but 2nd Lieutenant Kali Nicholotti was injured, taking a knife to the chest in order to save the Resolution's first officer. In the time after the mission, Makal and Kali have begun a close personal relationship as she recovers with her new artificial heard, and deals with the trauma of the attack. For his efforts, and command ability displayed during the mission, Lieutenant Kora has been awarded both the Motor Skills and Perception Calculations Commendation & Act of Mercy Unit Leader Citation.
-Despite the commendations received during the mission on Duronis II, Makal found himself shaken to his core. The events of that mission caused the Lieutenant to question whether or not this was the same Starfleet he had joined. Unable to find solace with the crew of the Resolution, Makal accepted an offer from the Andorain Science Institute to assist with their research into transwarp corridors. The news of his departure came as a shock to both Captain Turner, and Starfleet Command. Despite a communication sent from Admiral Rocar, and personal requests on the part of Lieutenant Nicholotti, Makal's remained steadfast in his decision to leave Starfleet.
+Despite the commendations received during the mission on Duronis II, Makal found himself once again questioning his role within Starfleet. The events of that mission caused the Lieutenant to question whether or not this was the same Starfleet he had joined. Unable to find solace with the crew of the Resolution, Makal accepted an offer from the Andorain Science Institute to assist with their research into transwarp corridors. The news of his departure came as a shock to both Captain Turner, and Starfleet Command. Despite a communication sent from Admiral Rocar, and personal requests on the part of Lieutenant Nicholotti, Makal's remained steadfast in his decision to leave Starfleet.
 ==Professional History==