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The response to the post was mixed and more or less negative, usually centering on my use of quotes from actual marine sims. It should be noted that the intent behind those quotes was not to attack the individual authors but rather to provide a bit more strength to my argument. However, I do concede the point that some might have been offended. | The response to the post was mixed and more or less negative, usually centering on my use of quotes from actual marine sims. It should be noted that the intent behind those quotes was not to attack the individual authors but rather to provide a bit more strength to my argument. However, I do concede the point that some might have been offended. | ||
====The Aftermath==== | |||
Since transferring I have been content. One thing I do notice however, is that the Victory exposes me to many more of my weaknesses as a writer. Whereas the USS Independence-A and, to a lesser extent, the Ronin tended to be vessels concerned with the mission and with a few smaller details on the characters, the USS Victory tends to feature sims that are much more relationship-driven. That is, there is a lot more romance. This is the form I'm weakest at, so I look forward to taking the opportunity to hone that skill aboard the Victory. | |||