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 Breeman:  Mr. Novak, I understand that for you this voyage is a practicum.  But you still need to tow the line like the rest of us.
-::Sarah was starting to understand.  She was coming down from her fun-loving undergraduate self and landing into a hardened shell of reality.  It was the shell which her mother and father had started to tell her about when she'd reached age thirteen and which the two had not stopped talking about since.::
+::Sarah was starting to understand.  She was coming down from her fun-loving undergraduate self and landing into a hardened shell of reality.  It was
+ the shell which her mother and father had started to tell her about when she'd reached age thirteen and which the two had not stopped talking about
+since.::
 Novak:  I-I understand sir.
-Breeman:  Look, I know how you're probably feeling right now.  I joined starfleet because I didn't want to have the responsibilities that a life in the world would have meant.  But now I've got other responsibilities.  I have to serve this team as best I can.  Part of that was you and I testing out this devil's garden so that I can now tell Lt. Cmdr Brice that our ship won't be destroyed by a rogue spatial anomaly.
+Breeman:  Look, I know how you're probably feeling right now.  I joined starfleet because I didn't want to have the responsibilities that a life in the
+world would have meant.  But now I've got other responsibilities.  I have to serve this team as best I can.  Part of that was you and I testing out
+this devil's garden so that I can now tell Lt. Cmdr Brice that our ship won't be destroyed by a rogue spatial anomaly.
 Novak:  Okay.  Thank you sir.  I will be more ... serious.