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 * '''Achievements''':
-** Graduting Starfleet Academy -- quite a feat considering Loran's little interest in academic pursuit, laziness, cheats, exploitation of others work, run-ins with almost every instructor and administrator and two accidents of near expel (Loran claims his innocence in second case).
+** Graduating Starfleet Academy -- quite a feat considering Loran's little interest in academic pursuit, laziness, cheats, exploitation of others work, run-ins with almost every instructor and administrator and two accidents of near expel (Loran claims his innocence in second case).
-** Winning of Academy Marathon in 2382 -- a prestige he owes equally to physical stamina and to personal cunning (in the hour before start he has poisoned strongest competitors with laxatives, a deed never unfolded).
+** Winning of 100th Starfleet Academy Marathon of May 2nd 2382, planet Rs III -- a prestige he owes equally to physical stamina and to personal cunning (in the hour before start he has poisoned strongest competitors with laxatives, a deed never unfolded).
 ** Numerous girly conquests of which true gentleman never speaks about (and Loran never speaks about in company of women).