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 <h4>General</h4>
 Ensign Melik Finley is a 36-year-old Starfleet officer with a reputation for being both a brilliant tactician and a bit of a maverick. He has a knack for thinking outside the box and coming up with unconventional solutions to complex problems, which has earned him both praise and criticism from his superiors.
-Being the son of a Human father and a Romulan mother, he learnt a lot from both cultures, which were often so hostile to each other
+Being the son of a Human father and a Romulan mother, he learnt from both cultures, which were often so hostile to each other.
-His mother, who had left the Romulan Empire before the Treaty of Algeron in the late 2300’s and finally reached the Federation via detours, where she initially settled on Vulcan.
+His mother, who had left the Romulan Empire before the Treaty of Algeron in the late 2300’s, finally reached the Federation via detours, where she initially settled on Vulcan.
 Several years later she met the human scientist John Finley there, who was working on a project with a Vulcan colleague at the Vulcan Scientific Institute. In the year 2365 Melik was born.
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 <h4>The Vulcan Years 2365 - 2375</h4>
-Melik spent the first 10 years of his life on Vulcan. There he learnt some basics about the Vulcan philosophy but never really felt at home, because he was not following the way of Surak and openly showed his emotions which led to him being shunned by most of his Vulcan peers. His reference persons were therefore only his parents and then his younger sister, who was born two years after him.
+Melik spent the first ten years of his life on Vulcan. There he learnt some basics about Vulcan philosophy but never really felt at home, because he was not following the Vulcan way of Surak and openly showed his emotions which led to him being shunned by most of his Vulcan peers. His reference persons were therefore only his parents and then his younger sister, who was born two years after him.
 <h4>The Earth Years 2375 - 2385</h4>
-When Melik was 10 years old, his family left Vulcan and moved back to Earth to his father's old home. Melik was quite happy that he could now live in a new environment, where it was easier for him to socialise with his peers. Even here, however, he sometimes encountered rejection due to his Romulan heritage, so ironically he sometimes pretended to be an “emotionless” Vulcan to avoid this problem.
+When Melik was 10 years old, his family left Vulcan and moved back to Earth to his father's old home. Melik was quite happy that he could now live in a new environment, where it was easier for him to socialise with his peers. Even here, however, he sometimes encountered doubts or even rejection due to his Romulan heritage, so ironically he sometimes pretended to be an “emotionless” Vulcan to avoid this problem.
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 <h4>Merchant Marine 2385 - 2396</h4>
-Melik had always felt the urge to learn more about space and see different worlds out there. However, he decided against applying to Starfleet Academy, as he was sure that he would be rejected because of his Romulan roots.
+Melik had always felt the urge to learn more about space and wanted to get "out there". However, he decided against applying to Starfleet Academy, as he was sure that he would be rejected because of his Romulan roots.
 So he started a career in the Federation Merchant Marine onboard the freighter Lynx. Transporting goods to Federation colonies most of the time, he took over several jobs of the five-member crew. After some time his skipper mostly entrusted him with security tasks and eventually he also became the right hand of his skipper.
 In his sparse free time, he read a lot and particularly wanted to learn more about his Romulan heritage. He was fascinated by Romulan culture and tradition, so he learnt
-to appreciate this side of his heritage more. From now on, he also stopped pretending to be Vulcan and embraced his heritage. He only used his first name Melik from now on. Instead of playing the “emotionless Vulcan”, he uses humour as a defence mechanism, often deflecting personal questions or uncomfortable situations with a well-timed joke.
+to appreciate this side of his heritage more. From now on, he also stopped pretending to be Vulcan and embraced his heritage. Furthermore, he only used his first name Melik from that time on. Instead of playing the “emotionless Vulcan”, he uses humour as a defence mechanism, often deflecting personal questions or uncomfortable situations with a well-timed joke.
 He often pretends that things don't really affect him inwardly and that he doesn't care, even if the opposite is the case. Melik doesn't want to let anything show on the outside.
-However, this did not prevent him from often being met with rejection and mistrust. Time and again, he himself is unsure of where he even belongs. To cope with these feelings, Melik has to fight an unhealthy temptation to use alcohol as a means of escapism. His tendency to drown his problems in the bottle has only exacerbated his struggles, leading to strained relationships with his skipper and crewmates and a growing sense of isolation.
+However, this did not prevent him from often being met with rejection and mistrust. Time and again, he himself is unsure of where he even belongs. To cope with these feelings, Melik has to fight an unhealthy temptation to use alcohol as a means of escapism. His tendency to drown his problems in the bottle has only exacerbated his struggles, even leading to a strained relationship with his skipper a growing sense of isolation.
 Despite his rough skin, Melik is fiercely loyal to his crewmates and would do anything to protect them. He has a strong moral compass and a sense of justice that drives him to stand up for what he believes is right, even if it sometimes means going against the grain. He is known for his bravery, resourcefulness and unwavering dedication to duty. Underneath his tough exterior, Melik is also a deeply compassionate and caring individual, often willing to act as a mentor and confidant to younger crewmembers.