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 ==Backstory/Timeline==
-Sedona was born in Ulkhar, the capital city of Denobula. Her parents raised her in one of the better suburbs of the city but had little time to care for their child. She grew up being raised by a nursemaid her parents paid for. While she was provided with all the luxuries a child could wish for, she would not exactly say that she lived a happy childhood.
+Sedona was born in Ulkhar, the capital city of Denobula. Her parents, residing in one of the city's more affluent suburbs, had little time to care for her. Consequently, she was raised by a nursemaid hired by her parents. Although she enjoyed all the material comforts a child could desire, she wouldn't describe her childhood as happy due to the absence of her parents.
-Sedona always enjoyed the company of her step-siblings and quickly became the head behind all the mischief they were about to conduct. Her big mouth got her into trouble with her mother more than once, but it also helped her get out of it again.
+As a result, Sedona found solace in the company of her step-siblings and quickly became the ringleader of their mischief. Her outspoken nature frequently landed her in trouble with her mother, but it also proved useful in extricating herself from such situations. This behavior became a consistent pattern throughout her youth, not only with her mother but also with her teachers.
-When Sedona graduated from school at the age of 19, her father passed away due to a horrible disease. Since she had specialized in becoming a merchant, as her father was, she decided to take over his business. Her big mouth and her flexible moral codex quickly got her in contact with the Orion Syndicate. She took their business and made a bunch of money in the process, which she was able to stash in a secure location in a Ferengi bank. Her big mouth and her inability to fulfill her biggest contract with the Syndicate put her within the Orion's crosshairs. Her life had been threatened multiple times since then, and the Syndicate has ceased her business. After a failed attempt to take her life, she decided that she needed protection and joined Starfleet. She has not told anybody within Starfleet about her secret and trusts the Fleet's security services to keep her safe.
+While there was little connection to her mother, Sedona always blamed her for not being there for her but spending time with friends while Sedona was raised by the nursemaid. Her father, on the other side, was somebody the young Denobulan admired for providing for the family. She always wanted to spend time with him, and so he took her to work at his trading business from time to time.
+At the age of 19, when Sedona graduated from school, her father tragically succumbed to a severe illness. Given her specialization in commerce, following in her father's footsteps, she assumed control of his business. Her outspoken nature and flexible moral code quickly brought her into contact with the Orion Syndicate. She accepted several business proposals by the syndicate and amassed substantial wealth, securely depositing it in a Ferengi bank. However, her outspokenness and inability to fulfill a critical Syndicate contract made her a target for the Orion Syndicate, leading to numerous threats on her life and the cessation of her business.
+Surviving a failed assassination attempt, she recognized the need for protection and subsequently joined Starfleet. She has kept her Syndicate ties and her past concealed from her fellow Starfleet members, relying on Starfleet's security services to ensure her safety.
 # '''236505.12''': Born on Denobula.
 # '''238404.17''': Her father died due to a disease