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 ** '''Team:''' Lieutenant Commander [[Jona ch'Ranni]], Lieutenant [[Lephi]], Lieutenant JG [[Tahna Meru]], and Ensign [[Bryce Tagren-Quinn]]. Lieutenant Commander [[Kero Rix]] assumed party lead about mid-way through this act.
-The group advances through the wreckage looking for survivors, but the structural integrity of the area makes the advance dangerous and puts both their lives and the lives of those they want to rescue at risk.
+The group, dressed in EVA suits, advances through the wreckage looking for survivors but the structural integrity of the area and unreliable sensors makes the advance dangerous and puts both their lives and the lives of those they want to rescue at risk.
 After failing to find live survivors and having to make a decision on what to do with them, the team moved into the most damaged area of the deck. There, they find a Tellarite crewman, Ensign [[Tzim-Shah]]. The crewman's condition was critical, even more so considering there were others wounded in the area so, while discussing what to do and getting the other survivors to safety [[Lephi]], ignoring Dr. [[Bryce Tagren-Quinn]]'s advice and listening to the Tellarite's desperate plea, cut off his trapped arm with a plasma torch. This reckless and desperate act resulted in a great shock and put the ensign's life in danger. Concerned about the situation, it was determined to create a triage unit at the brig and Lieutenant Commander [[Jona ch'Ranni]] marched over there with the Tellarite to organise it.
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 The team was now captained by Lieutenant Commander [[Kero Rix]], who pushed the team forward towards the most damaged section of the deck. On their way, they found a few more survivors.
-Once there, they discovered signs that [[Valesha Sienelis]] and [[Vorin]] were trapped at ground zero of the explosion, behind a large wall of rubble. With the transporters inoperative and the deck structure disintegrating beneath their feet, the team had to work against the clock to develop a plan to save them.
+Once there, they discovered signs that [[Valesha Sienelis]] and [[Vorin]] were trapped at ground zero of the explosion, behind a large wall of rubble. Upon arrival, the ceiling of the lab collapsed, causing Sienelis and Vorin to essentially be buried and thought to be potentially deceased. With the transporters inoperative and the deck structure disintegrating beneath their feet, the team had to work against the clock to develop a plan to rescue them or press on for other survivors. Time and resources were at a minimum. This caused a great debate between the team's members, but eventually they decided to give it a chance and resolved to work the problem.
-Just as they were about to run out of ideas to save them, [[Robert Peek]] informed them that the transporters were back online, allowing them to transport the debris to the Rift and reach the two Vulcanoids. They discovered that one of them was badly injured and the other was in late labour.
+Just as they were about to run out of ideas to save them, [[Robert Peek]] informed them that the transporters were back online. At first, they attempting to lock on to life signs, but sensors and interference made that almost impossible. Instead, and with limited power and time still in mind, they decided to transport the debris to the Rift instead, to clear the field, thus revealing the two Vulcanoids. They discovered that one of them was badly injured and the other was in late labour.
 The team quickly moved to the sickbay, just with the entrance of [[Christopher Johns]] where [[Bryce Tagren-Quinn]] and [[Tali Namura]] helped the little human/Romulan girl into the world.