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 *'''DoB:''' 236711.24
 *'''Age:''' 24
-*'''Birthplace:''' On a farm outside the city of Rebirth on her home world of Novan
+*'''Birthplace:''' On a farm outside the city of Rebirth on her home world of Terra Nova
-*'''Gender:''' Male
+*'''Gender:''' Female
 *'''Telepathic status''': N/A
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 *Eyes: Dark Brown
 *Skin Tone: Asian
-*Face: block like with protruding cheeks
+*Face: Oval
 *Build: petite, yet athletic
 *Identifying Marks: N/A
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 <h2 style="margin:0; background:gold; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Description</h2>
-Sha is a no nonsense woman who takes her job very seriously. While she may be small, she comes off like the proverbial irresistable force she is. She has intelligent eye's, a round face that is both feminine and commanding. Her figure is that of a pre teen athletic girl.
+Sha is a no nonsense woman who takes her job very seriously. While she may be small, she comes off like the proverbial irresistible force she is. She has intelligent eye's, a round face that is both feminine and commanding. Her figure is that of a pre-teen athletic girl.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:gold; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Family</h2>
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 <h2 style="margin:0; background:gold; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Backstory</h2>
-Even in this day and age people on Earth live in sub-standard conditions. So it was with Sha. Her home village was small, poor and the standard of living and education was far below the acceptable norm. Sha was one of 9 children. 5 died due to disease, malnourishment or other easily corrected problems. She was lucky. At age 10 she was sent to live with cousins. She was able to attend a good school, eat regular health meals. In school she strived to be the best. It worked and she was able to go on to attend University on a full scholorship.
+Even in this day and age people on Terra Nova live in sub-standard conditions. So it was with Sha. Her home village was small, poor and the standard of living and education was far below the acceptable norm. Sha was one of 9 children. 5 died due to disease, malnourished or other easily corrected problems. She was lucky. At age 10 she was sent to live with cousins. She was able to attend a good school, eat regular health meals. In school she strived to be the best. It worked and she was able to go on to attend University on a full scholarship.
+However during her first year she was approached by one of her professors who suggested she apply to starfleet academy. She considered it for a while and then applied. While at the Academy she excelled and graduated 3rd in her class.
+Sha sends almost her entire pay home to her family. The adventure and excitement of serving in Starfleet has become her new life, but she can never forget her past.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:gold; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Medical History </h2>
-*'''Pre-Starfleet Medical Records''' - He had the regular child hood ailments expected of a member of his species prior to his admittance to the Academy.
+*'''Pre-Starfleet Medical Records''' - She had the regular child hood ailments expected of a member of her species prior to his admittance to the Academy.
 *'''Starfleet Medical Records''' - He has been fairly healthy so far except for a series of extreme rashes that were caused by to high of a alien protein intake in his food during his first year at the Academy.
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-However during her first year she was approached by one of her professors who suggested she apply to starfleet academy. She considered it for a while and then applied. While at the Academy she excelled and graduated 3rd in her class.
-Sha sends almost her entire pay home to her family. The adventure and excitement of serving in starfleet has become her new life, but she can never forget her past.