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 ====Off Duty====
-Aria wears clothing that is comfortable, but feminine.  Skirts with jackets and sensible shoes in a variety of colors.  Her clothes tend to have pockets where she keeps a PADD or two so she can pull out a book or other work for when she gets bored.
+Aria wears comfortable feminine clothing, often pairing dresses and skirts with jackets.  It's not unusual to see her wearing dress clothing with boots or other sensible shoes.  When the occasion calls for it she does not hesitate to dress up.
+She does not consider herself someone who collects clothing, but those who have seen her closets would disagree.
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 {{Citation|Good Conduct Ribbon|239306.28|[[Embassy of Duronis II]]|Awarded to an individual who shows conspicuous gallantry in the line of duty.}}
 {{Citation|War of Shadows Ribbon|239306.28|[[Embassy of Duronis II]]|Awarded to an individual who participated in the War of Shadows in 2393.}}
-{{Citation|Captain's Commendation|239402.09|[[Embassy of Duronis II]]|}}|
+{{Citation|Captain's Commendation|239402.09|[[Embassy of Duronis II]]|Admiral Turner}}
 {{Citation|Legion of Merit|239402.09|[[Embassy of Duronis II]]|Her efforts to keep the Bronwyn in one piece and up and running during conflict.}}
 {{Citation|Innovation Ribbon|239402.09|[[Embassy of Duronis II]]|Innovative design and successful implementation of the TOUPM.}}