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 ===Stats===
-*it's orbit is approximately 43 million km from it's star
+*Its orbit is approximately 43 million km from its star.
-*a hot rock ball of a planet with a diameter of 1,035 km (647 miles).
+*A hot, rocky ball of a planet with a diameter of 1,035 km (647 miles).
-*a density of 2.1 and a gravity of 0.03 G's
+*Density of 2.1
-*no atmosphere
+*Gravity of 0.03 G's
+*No atmosphere
 ===Resources===
-*unknown at this time
+*Unknown at this time
 [[Category:Planets]]
 [[Category:Waw-Yodh system]]