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 {{Orum Tak}}
 ===Stats===
-*it's orbit is approximately 169 million km from it's star
+*Its orbit is approximately 169 million km from its star.
-*a greenhouse planet with a diameter of 13,307 km (8,317 miles).
+*A greenhouse planet with a diameter of 13,307 km (8,317 miles).
-*a density of 4.3 and a gravity of 0.82 G's
+*Density of 4.3.
-*a standard atmosphere of 0.96 with nitrogen 72%, oxygen 23% and other gases 3%
+*Gravity of 0.82 G's.
-*it has an axial tilt of 15% that results in some seasonal variations
+*Standard atmosphere of 0.96 with nitrogen 72%, oxygen 23% and other gases 3%.
-*day time temperatures are on average 26C to 39C and night time temeratures are on average 11C to 27C with season fluxuations of between 15 and 25 degrees
+*It has an axial tilt of 15% that results in some seasonal variations.
-*surface water over 58% of the planets surface with 46% of that being salt water oceans
+*Day time temperatures are on average 26C to 39C and night time temperatures are on average 11C to 27C; seasonal fluctuations are between 15 and 25 degrees Celsius.
-*with a year of 251 days, each day is 22.3 hours long
+*Surface water covers 58% of the planets surface with 46% of that being saltwater oceans.
-*the
+*A year consists of 251 days, each day is 22.3 hours long.
 ===Resources===
-*unknown at this time, as the only known survey was conducted by the Romulans
+*Unknown at this time, as the only known survey was conducted by the Romulans.
 [[Category:Planets]]
 [[Category:Orum Tak system]]
 [[Category:Jenatris Cloud Sector]]