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 {{Kivis}}
 ===Stats===
-*it's orbit is approximately 47 million km from it's star
+*Orbit is approximately 47 million km from its star
-*a rock ball of a planet with a diameter of 12,102 km (7,564 miles).
+*Rock ball of a planet with a diameter of 12,102 km (7,564 miles).
-*a density of 4.9 and a gravity of 0.84 G's
+*Density of 4.9
-*a dense atmosphere of 1.21 with nitrogen 63%, carbon oxides 22%, oxygen 13% and other gas's 2%
+*Gravity of 0.84 G's
-*an axial tilt of 17% but with a slight wobble
+*Dense atmosphere of 1.21 with nitrogen 63%, carbon oxides 22%, oxygen 13% and other gas's 2%
-*daytime temperatures are on average between 35C and 43C, while the night time temperatures can drop to 23C to 31C
+*Axial tilt of 17% with a slight wobble
-*approximately 19% surface water
+*Daytime temperatures are on average between 35C and 43C; night time temperatures can drop to between 23C to 31C
-*with a year of 202 days, each day 23 hours long
+*Approximately 19% surface water
-*primary terrain features are dirt and rock
+*Year of 202 days, each day 23 hours long
-*extensive stone construction in the form of strange standing stone configurations
+*Primary terrain features are dirt and rock
+*Extensive stone construction in the form of strange standing stone configurations
 ===Resources===
-*unknown at this time
+*Unknown at this time
 ===Moons===
-*it has 1 small moon, 1 medium moon and 1 large moon
+*One small, one medium, and one large moon
 *'''Kivis IIIa:''' is 1,229 km (768 miles) in diameter, with a density of 3.6 and a gravity of 0.06 G's. It orbits the planets surface at a height of 27,419 km. (17,137 miles)
 *'''Kivis IIIb:''' is 5,019 km (3,137 miles) in diameter, with a density of 4.6 and a gravity of 0.33 G's. It orbits the planets surface at a height of 30,256 km. (18,910 miles)
 *'''Kivis IIIc:''' is 2,357 km (1,473 miles) in diameter, with a density of 4.0 and a gravity of 0.13 G's. It orbits the planets surface at a height of 31,942 km. (19,964 miles)
-===Orbiting Satellites===
+===Orbital Satellites===
-Their is a network of 50 orbiting satellites around this planet. They have advanced jamming technology and block all scans of the planet below. They also have an advanced defensive system easily capable of preventing any ship from getting to close or from entering the atmosphere.
+There is a network of fifty satellites orbiting around the planet. They have advanced jamming technology and block all scans of the planet below. They also have an advanced defensive system easily capable of preventing any ship from getting too close or entering the atmosphere.
 [[Category:Planets]]
 [[Category:Kivis system]]