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-'''Krindo Pandorn''' is currently serving as a '''tactical officer''' aboard the {{USS|Za}}.
+'''Krindo Pandorn''' is currently serving as a '''Tactical Officer''' aboard the {{USS|Za}}.
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 BACKGROUND:
-Krindo lived in the quintissential small Minnesota town until he learned he was actually adopted as a baby. His adopted parents tried to keep that fact from him until he applied to Starfleet when the usual medical scans revealed no blood relations with any of them. This revelation caused a falling out with his family, though he doesn't blame them for not telling him.
+Krindo lived in a typical small Minnesota town until he learned he was actually adopted as a baby. His adopted parents tried to keep that fact from him until he applied to Starfleet when the usual medical scans revealed no blood relations with any of them. This revelation caused a falling out with his family, though he doesn't blame them for not telling him. He sometimes wonders who his biological parents were and why he wasn't told until now.
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