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 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Character Information</h2>
-*'''Full Name:''' Kavis-Abro
+*'''Full Name:''' Horg,Teg'ik
-*'''Race:''' [[Grazerite]]
+*'''Race:''' [[Tellarite]]
 *'''DoB:''' 236407.14
 *'''Age:''' 25
-*'''Birthplace:''' Grazer III, also called Graz-Horr
+*'''Birthplace:''' In the city of Kurvin on the colony world of Devios III.
 *'''Gender:''' Male
 * '''Telepathic status''': N/A
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 *Height: 5'10"
-*Weight: 170 lbs
+*Weight: 200 lbs
-*Hair: None but he does have 2 curves horns on his head.
+*Hair: Shoulder length and dirty brown
+*Beard: He has a nice thick beard.
 *Eyes: Brown
-*Skin Tone: His entire body is covered with a flat layer of short amber hair/fur.
+*Skin Tone: light brown, tanned.
-*Face: oval in shape with plenty of wrinkles.
+*Face: a rounded face with plenty of wrinkles.
-*Build: slim and athletic
+*Build: Bulky, stocky, pudgy
 *Identifying Marks: none
-*Clothing (Off-Duty): He tends to wear loose shirts and pants or robes.
+*Clothing (Off-Duty): He tends to wear loose shirts and typical Tellarite garments.
-*Voice: slightly high pitched yet not offensive.
+*Voice: deep and grating.
-*Handedness: left
+*Handednesss: right
 *Tattoos: None
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Description</h2>
-Kavis-Abro has a tall, willowy, athletic body and typical Grazerite facial features. These  include a pronounced, deeply furrowed brow and a bovine snout. Two slightly curving horns, which may reach ten centimeters in length, crown his head. His thick hide has a flat layer of amber hair all over it.
+Horg is slightly taller than most Tellarite males. Other than that he is very similar with a thick beard, wiry hair and many facial lines. He also tends to be in slightly better shape than most other Tellarites.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Family</h2>
-*Father: Tobru-Abro is a senior designer of environmental protection systems.
+Horg,Teg'ik was born and raised on the colony world of Devios III. A fairly typical terraformed colony world where his parents had been part of the terraforming crew that remained once their work was done. After that they helped build the city of Kurvin and now work to maintain many of its technical systems.
-*Mother: Ivaa-Abro worked as a nurse before she had children. Now that they have all grown up she has taken up an interest in music.
-*Siblings: He has 3 sisters and 4 brothers. He is the 2nd oldest.
+*Father: Diry Teg’ik is a mechanical engineer.
+*Mother: Hurnis Teg’ik is an engineering systems designer.
+*Siblings: He comes from a fairly large family with 5 brothers and 4 sisters. He is the 2nd youngest.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Personal Friends and
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 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Minor Details and Mannerisms</h2>
-*'''Favorite Drink:''' fruit flavoured water
+*'''Favorite Drink:''' Tellarite beer.
-*'''Favourite Food: ''' any kind of salad with greens
+*'''Favourite Food: ''' Anything Tellarite as it reminds him of home.
 *'''Music Tastes:''' Soft music that mimics nature.
-*'''Religious Beliefs:''' Rational atheist with philosophical ideals
+*'''Religious Beliefs:'''
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Languages Spoken</h2>
 *Federation standard (Fluent)
-*Grazerite (Fluent)
+*Tellarite (Fluent)
+*Arkenite (Basic)
+*Bolian (Basic)
+*Caitian (Basic)
+*Denobulan (Basic)
+*Rigelian (Basic)
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Backstory</h2>
-Born on the Grazerite home world of Graz-Horr he grew up in a stable family on the outskirts of one of the northern continents large cities, Niv-on. His family was well off and they enjoyed a life of easy and fulfillment. He did well in school and was well liked by everyone.
+Born on the terraformed colony world of Devios III in the city of Kurvin on the southern continent, Horg grew up the 2nd youngest of 10 kids. With a population of just under 7,000 there were not a lot of Tellarites in the colony. As a result he grew up playing and attending school with kids from a large number of different species.
-However when it came time for him to enroll in University he opted to enroll in the Academy instead. He felt it would provide more of a chance for travel and new experiences.
+Unlike most of his family he wanted more of a challenge out of life. As a result he applied for and was accepted into Starfleet.
 <h2 style="margin:0; background:blue; font-size:120%; font-weight:bold; text-align:center; color:#ffffff; padding:0.2em 0.4em;">Medical History </h2>
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-=='''Character Information'''==
-*'''Full Name:''' Horg,Teg'ik
-*'''Race:''' [[Tellarite]]
-*'''DoB:''' 236407.14
-*'''Age:''' 25
-*'''Birthplace:''' In the city of Kurvin on the colony world of Devios III.
-*'''Gender:''' Male
-* '''Telepathic status''': N/A
-=='''Appearance:'''==
-*Height: 5'10"
-*Weight: 200 lbs
-*Hair: Shoulder length and dirty brown
-*Beard: He has a nice thick beard.
-*Eyes: Brown
-*Skin Tone: light brown, tanned.
-*Face: a rounded face with plenty of wrinkles.
-*Build: Bulky, stocky, pudgy
-*Identifying Marks: none
-*Clothing (Off-Duty): He tends to wear loose shirts and typical Tellarite garments.
-*Voice: deep and grating.
-*Handednesss: right
-*Tattoos: None
-=='''Family:'''==
-Horg,Teg'ik was born and raised on the colony world of Devios III. A fairly typical terraformed colony world where his parents had been part of the terraforming crew that remained once their work was done. After that they helped build the city of Kurvin and now work to maintain many of its technical systems.
-*Father: Diry Teg’ik is a mechanical engineer.
-*Mother: Hurnis Teg’ik is an engineering systems designer.
-*Siblings: He comes from a fairly large family with 5 brothers and 4 sisters. He is the 2nd youngest.
-=='''Personal Friends and Relationships'''==
-*'''Marital Status:''' Single
-*'''Friends: ''' ??
-=='''Minor Details and Mannerisms:'''==
-*'''Favorite Drink:''' Tellarite beer.
-*'''Favourite Food: ''' Anything Tellarite as it reminds him of home.
-*'''Music Tastes:''' Soft music that mimics nature.
-*'''Religious Beliefs:'''
-=='''Languages spoken'''==
-*Federation standard (Fluent)
-*Tellarite (Fluent)
-*Arkenite (Basic)
-*Bolian (Basic)
-*Caitian (Basic)
-*Denobulan (Basic)
-*Rigelian (Basic)
-=='''Description'''==
-Horg is slightly taller than most Tellarite males. Other than that he is very similar with a thick beard, wiry hair and many facial lines. He also tends to be in slightly better shape than most other Tellarites.
-=='''Backstory'''==
-Born on the terraformed colony world of Devios III in the city of Kurvin on the southern continent, Horg grew up the 2nd youngest of 10 kids. With a population of just under 7,000 there were not a lot of Tellarites in the colony. As a result he grew up playing and attending school with kids from a large number of different species.
-Unlike most of his family he wanted more of a challenge out of life. As a result he applied for and was accepted into Starfleet.
 =='''Medical History'''==