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 On Avronis' Moon Station, Administrator tr'Lleodah is reassured to see that nature is making a quiet come back to his planet. Emboldened by this, he prepared a little reception to receive Captain Livingston. On Avronis itself though, things are far from being pleasant. The staff working in the recycling stations suffered a spell of dangerous accidents that menaced their health and forced the shut down of several facilities, slowing down their recycling program.
-Moments later, unbeknown to everyone, as soon as he reached Avronis, Captain Livingston was captured by Major Nelkar, a Tal Shiar agent trapped in an underground facility on the planet.
+Moments later, unbeknownst to everyone, as soon as he reached Avronis, Captain Livingston was captured by Major Nelkar, a Tal Shiar agent trapped in an underground facility on the planet.
-While en route to Romulan Space, Lt JG. Whittaker and Ensign Oori discovered that their shuttles had been tempered with.  When Ambassador MacLaren discovered this drawback, he allowed the crew to use the 'Robert Bruce' his specially modified shuttle. However, on his way back from checking on this shuttle's specifications, Lt. Whittaker was viciously attacked.
+After checking the specifications of Ambassador MacLaren's shuttle. Lt JG. Whittaker was viciously attacked and lost consciousness. He was found by Ensigns Oori and Ezo, and promptly transported to Sickbay. There, a Marine, who appeared to have lost control of his mind, pointed a phaser at Ezo. Thankfully, the entrance of a hapless crewman with an injured hand provided a distraction and Tatash incapacitated the Marine.
+Later, while in security, Tatash suffered a mental assault, leaving him with just enough lucidity to call Dr. MacLaren. Their CMO went to him right away. Upon discovering his trauma, both transported back to Sickbay.
-He was found by Ensigns Oori and Ezo, and promptly transported to Sickbay. Brek and Tatash both reported there in order to question the young engineer, but the interview never happened. For soon after the arrival of Ensign Korras, (who revealed yet more problems, this time connected to their sensors), a Marine, who appeared to have lost control of his mind, turned on them, pointing a phaser at Ezo. Thankful, the entrance of a hapless crewman with an injured hand provided a distraction and Tatash incapacitated the Marine.
+At the same time, while enjoying some rest time in the Galactic Halo, LtCmdr. Vitor Silveira and Ensign Antero Flynn came across an invisible entity who tried to take control of Silveira.
-Tatash brought the unconscious Marine to the Security Department, where he suffered a mental assault, leaving him with just enough lucidity to call Dr. MacLaren. Their CMO went to him right away. Upon discovering his trauma, both transported back to Sickbay.
+Meanwhile, Major Nelkar lost control of his underground base when the Iconian gate activated itself, releasing several brutal aliens. The gate caused intense tremors that facilitated the escape of Captain Ben Linvingston and his small crew. Aware that he was well and truly trapped, Nelkar sided with Livingston, and together, they managed to escape from Avronis onboard the Kumari.
-During that time, Korras had apprehended one of the invisible saboteurs, and was struggling to keep control of that being.
+On Columbia, one of the 'invisible' saboteurs revealed itself as an Iconian. After a lengthy discussion with LtCmdr. Brek, it gave the crew an ultimatum: they would spare the lives of the Romulans working on the recycling project, at the condition that this encounter be classified, and that the Avronis gateway be once and for all destroyed. They left the ship right after their terms had been accepted.
-Two decks above, while enjoying some rest time in the Galactic Halo, LtCmdr. Vitor Silveira and Ensign Antero Flynn came across another invisible being, who tried to take control of Silveira.
+Soon after, Captain Ben Livingston, the Kumari crew, along with Nelkar and some of his men, rendezvoused with the Columbia. Doctor Johanna MacLaren and Ensign Flynn, who greeted them, discovered that their Captain had a severe case of radiation poisoning.
-Meanwhile, after a huge explosion that claimed their most important recycling station, Administrator tr'Lleodah went to Avronis V, where he discovered that the workforce was fomenting a mutiny.
-At the same time, Major Nelkar lost control of his underground base when the Iconian gate activated itself, releasing several aliens inside his base. The activation provoked several intense tremors that facilitated the escape of Captain Ben Linvingston and his small crew. Aware that he was well and truly trapped, Nelkar sided with Livingston, and together they worked on a way to get away from Avronis.