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 Isaac grew up with overprotective parents.  Consequently Isaac joined Starfleet to learn to be more independent and to break away and become his own individual.
 Isaac had a difficult time during his academy years because his parents had failed to condition him to be a forward and creative thinker.  Meeting those challenges
-head on, Isaac is on track to graduate the Academy with a good grades and the prospect of a good placement.
+head on, Isaac worked as hard as he could in the Academy and is on track to Graduate well.
 Isaac is a gentle person, and very slow to anger.  He will defend himself if attacked personally, but not always.  He works hard at everything his does, but has little
-confidence in his ability.  Struggles to work on his own but functions well in a group/peer setting.  Isaac is eager to mark his mark on the world.
+confidence in his ability.  Isaac struggles to work on his own but functions well in a group/peer setting.  Isaac is eager to mark his mark on the world, but would feel better if it
+was in his comfort zone.
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