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 ==Backstory/Timeline==
-Isaac grew up with overprotective parents.  Consequently Isaac joined Starfleet to learn to be more independent and to break away and become his own individual.
+Isaac grew up with overprotective parents.  Being born on a Starship meant that Isaac tended to have few friends of his own age and relied heavily on his parents and the friends of his parents.  Desperate to break this mould as he entered his teenage years, Isaac strived to join Starfleet to learn to be more independent and to break away and become his own individual.  All the while terrified at the prospect of doing so.
 Isaac had a difficult time during his academy years because his parents had failed to condition him to be a forward and creative thinker.  Meeting those challenges
-head on, Isaac worked as hard as he could in the Academy and is on track to Graduate well.
+head on, Isaac worked as hard as he could in the Academy and is on track to Graduate well.  While feeling much more independent than he was as a child, Isaac still tended to be, as his friends would say, "A mummy's boy."  Isaac didn't really see a problem with the relationship he still held with his mother despite what his friends might say.
 Isaac is a gentle person, and very slow to anger.  He will defend himself if attacked personally, but not always.  He works hard at everything his does, but has little