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 ===='''[[Culemerwin, Halla | Halla Culemerwin]]'''====
 '''Relationship lasting 2381-Present'''<br>
-Alana met this mysterious, handsome Trill man one trip back to Betazed. They shared hearty conversations and a mutual interest. Come to find out a little later, the man that she had dinner with and an enchanted walk under the blanket of Betazed stars, was the twin brother of her best friend, Idril Mar.
+Alana met this mysterious, handsome Trill man one trip back to Betazed. They shared hearty conversations, dinner and walk under the blanket of stars. It was revealed later, during a trip to Trill where she participated in her best friend’s Zhian'tara, that the man was the slightly older twin brother of Idril Mar.  While on Trill, Halla and Alana gave in to their mutual attraction, after getting past the initial shock and coincidence.
-She did not realize the irony of the situation until she met him during Idril's ritual to connect with previous hosts back on Trill. It was there the two gave in to their mutual attraction.
+He is the father of Alana's child, Keiran, which was the product of that spur of the moment tryst. Halla, known as a notorious playboy, was an instrumental figure and mainstay for her and the child. This changed Alana’s preconceived notions of men, which slowly turned her opinions around (see Psychological Profile for more information).  It was a man that never let her down.
-He is the father of Alana's child, Keiran, which was the product of that spur of the moment tryst. Halla, known as a notorious playboy, was there for her and the child. The pair moved in together, creating a married-type life after working out their relationship's kinks.  It was a somewhat hard road for them at first, but, over time, they grew on each other.  A daughter would follow years later, proving the relationship more than an affair but love for both.
+The pair moved in together, creating a married-type life after working out their relationship's kinks.  It was a somewhat hard road for them at first, but, over time, they grew on each other.  A daughter would follow years later, proving the relationship more than an affair but love for both. A commitment ceremony will be held on the Estates of the 13th House. Even though no date has been set, she is serious enough to carry his surname.
-A commitment ceremony will be held on the Estates of the 13th House, but no date has been set, though she is serious enough to carry his surname.
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