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 If someone were to describe him I believe they would call him loyal. He always stay true to whatever path he takes and is willing to go through all the hardships that lay before him. He always had chosen that hard road of life because half the time it is not the choosing of the path but the acceptance of it. He wanted to make a difference, but was always left out. He tries hard and when he finally achieve one goal he has a million more to do. So he lives on from day to day, living the way he wants to be.
-His family is scattered all around, never having the time to take care of him and leaving him in the care of teachers and sitters. He was raised to take care of himself. He was bullied in his younger age for not having the lifestyles they had. He had friends and they were the closest thing he had to a family. He comes from a long line of military men and women all the way back to ancient times of swordsman throughout the world from knights of England to the Samurai of Japan, carrying the family sword to prove his true loyalty is to his family and their code of honor.
+He comes from a long line of military men and women all the way back to ancient times of swordsman throughout the world from knights of England to the Samurai of Japan, carrying the family sword to prove his true loyalty is to his family and their code of honor.
-He hides his problems under a thick coat of pride, achievement, and self righteousness. Everything he does, from the moment he wakes up he lives for the perfection for whatever he does. That is the discipline he taught himself. To devote oneself to the perfection of whatever you do.
+He hides his problems under a thick coat of pride, achievement, and self righteousness. Everything he does, from the moment he wakes up he lives for the perfection. That is the discipline taught unto him as with all members of his family. Clear cut devotion and loyalty to the House, and the will and determination in any purpose.
-He had entered the military life at a young age, wanting to learn the trade that his family had been doing for generation. He really wanted to be like his father, the proud and what he would always call "invincible" warrior, but he always feel that he can never be his father. Because of that goal, he had studied varies of subjects and also as per with family tradition, he had learned some of the things that made their family their name as knights. He is an adpet at more than half a dozen martial arts styles, fencing, and other swordsmanship styles.
-His family, for many hundreds of years has been a constant unchanged enigma of business enterprises and royal noblity. They have been known as one of Earth's most known and richest family. Like many other notable families in the Federation, but also one of the more rarest. These are the ones that bound themselves to tradition. They are knights of old, servants of the people, they look out for the best interest of the human race.
+Like all Fanels, Jacen baptized in the fires of combat. He was raised to have the ability to fight. Like his entire family, he is a Knight, servant of the people, looking out for the best interst of the House and balance of power.
 == '''House Fanel''' ==