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 {{Jakvourus}}
 ===Stats===
-*it's orbit is approximately 149 million km from it's star
+*Its orbit is approximately 149 million km from its star.
-*a rock ball of a planet with a diameter of 3,171.2 km (1,982 miles).
+*A rocky ball of a planet with a diameter of 3,171.2 km (1,982 miles).
-*a density of 3.8 and a gravity of 0.17 G's
+*Density of 3.8
-*no atmosphere
+*Gravity of 0.17 G's
+*No atmosphere
 ===Resources===
-*unknown at this time
+*Unknown at this time.
 ===Moons===
-*it has 1 small moon
+*One small moon.
-*'''Jakvourus IVa:''' is 547 km (342 miles) in diameter, with a density of 2.4 and a gravity of 0.02 G's. It orbits the planets surface at a height of 7,928 km. (4,955 miles)
+*'''Jakvourus IVa:''' is 547 km (342 miles) in diameter, with a density of 2.4 and a gravity of 0.02 G's. It orbits the planets surface at a height of 7,928 km (4,955 miles).
 [[Category:Planets]]
 [[Category:Jakvourus system]]