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 much trouble finding new friends there and enjoyed the time they spent socialising. Her academic performance was average, which was mainly due to the
 fact that she often spent her free time with her friends instead of learning for her courses. Nevertheless, she was able to pass the courses, even the
-ones, she was not that much interested in. She liked the tactics courses, which resulted in good results in that field, as well as physical education.
+ones, she was not that much interested in. She liked the tactics courses, which resulted in good results in that field, as well as science courses and physical education.
-In the last two Academy years, after completion of the Academy's General Studies program, she finally spent more time on learning as she concentrated
+When  she had finished the General studies program, it was quite hard for her to decide ona special field of expertise, so she took courses in both security and science. However, this meant that she had to concentrate more on learning. In the last two Academy yearsple she finally spent more time on learning. It was at that time that strong, black coffee became her favourite drink.
-on her minors and majors which she laid in the fields of security and tactics. It was at that time that strong, black coffee became her favourite drink.
 In the end she didn’t rank among the best, but she had improved and achieved good results.