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 * '''Profile''': Though highly intelligent and educated, S'Lone can come across to some as aloof, arrogant and elitist.  What seems aloof is a shyness or hesitancy to make any lasting interpersonal relationships. What seems arrogance comes from an intense self confidence. In what seems like elitism, well, umm, is actually elitism. If there is one concept that permiates to his core it is the Marine concept of F-I-D-O.
 * '''Dislikes''': Ashamed of his Betazoid side, it's weakness and pacifism. Shame translates into dislike. Also not a big fan of Trills due to his having had a large parasite attach itself to his spine 10 years ago while he was on a mission with the Starfleet Marines.
-* '''Ambitions and Goals''': Gain knowledge and rise in Starfleet.  SSecret goal: see his Grandfather writhe in abject misery under a cortical pain enhancer trapped in a crescendo of pain never to abate.
+* '''Ambitions and Goals''': Gain knowledge and rise in Starfleet.  Secret goal: see his Grandfather writhe in abject misery under a cortical pain enhancer trapped in a crescendo of pain never to abate.
 * '''Personal Disappointments''': Not seeking out his mother during his Starfleet Academy graduation ceremony.  He knew she was there but avoided meeeting her.