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Lieutenant Commander Toryn Raga, an Al-Leyan is currently serving his second duty post aboard the USS Chin'toka as the Second Officer and leader of the SOR Team.

USS Atlantis
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Toryn Ket Raga
Position Second Officer/SOR Team Leader
Rank Lieutenant Commander
Species Al-Leyan
Gender Male
DOB 237003.11
Age 28
Birthplace Sez Toural Southern Polar region, Leya-I
Writer ID A239410TR0

Biographical Information

  • Full Name: Toryn Ket Raga
  • Race: Al-Leyan
  • Birthdate: 237003.11
    • Age: 27
  • Place of Birth: Sez Toural Southern Polar Region, Leya-l
  • Gender: Male
  • Telepathic Status: T2/E0+


  • Height: 6'1" (186cm)
  • Weight: 225 lbs. (102kg)
  • Hair: Raven Black
  • Length of Hair: Shoulder Length
  • Eyes: Vibrant Sapphire
  • Skin tone: Light skinned
  • Build: Slender and slightly muscular
  • Taste in Clothing (When off duty): Despite spending the last five years among other species, he still tends to prefer traditional Al-Leyan attire.
  • Voice: Slight Baritone
  • Handedness: Ambidextrous
  • Birthmarks, Scars: 9 tiny, perfectly round 3mm scars evenly spaced down his spine, from the base of his skull to his lower back. (Result of modified Attitude Readjustment Therapy)


  • Temperament: Quite easy going for the most part, though situations where he makes mistakes can tend to cause him to introvert for brief periods of self reflection. Can be somewhat emotive when under duress caused from negative consequences to his own actions.
  • Faults/Weaknesses: Having endured two readjustment therapies may have unknown psychological consequences on his psyche. As a result, he feels he has been a failure twice already in his life and must strive to prove he is capable. Potentially to the point of excessive overcompensation and occasional second guessing of his decisions.
  • Corrected Faults/Weaknesses: No longer aspires to engage in pursuit of Science Prote; No longer has subversive mating interest in non Al-Leyans.



  • Marital Status: Unwed, but spoken for.

Haemachuo Upbringing

  • Carers: Nesta Cehrin, Riken Tanteyra, Solussi Vant
  • Siblings: Ril Caryth, Seeyra Caryth, Totthirin Vantu (Deceased)
  • Mentors: Senjo Ricith, Pendar Elos, Lisou Marata

Biological Parents

  • Mother: Mey'a Raga
  • Father: Ket Talso
  • Blood Siblings: Jolyn Seena (Eldest sister), Jentra Estris (Second eldest sister), Kiitiarel Raga (Third eldest sister), Metrias Raga (Younger brother, in Haemachuo care.)

Human Engineer and fellow department Chief. The two of them both took their final exam together at the Academy. During the exam, Toryn's actions resulted in a scenario where the away team Dermont was on, was nearly 'killed'. As a result, he views he owes a debt to the much older Lieutenant. They have served on Atlantis now for a year and counting and are best friends. The curmudgeonly engineer is known to be quite fiercely protective of Toryn, especially when it comes to the women in his life who have broken his heart.

Half Human, half Romulan fellow security/tactical officer as well as his Assistant Chief. Toryn has long had feelings for Serala, even prior to ever having met Lael Rosek. Toryn has since made his love for her known, sadly it came far too late as their mutual affections for one another only came out after she had asked hi to walk her down the aisle at her wedding. Toryn considers her his only other best friend. And struggles with being hers, as well as her professional equal and not causing her any more undue heartache than he has. Even though, she is the second woman to have broken his own heart. The best of friends, Toryn is the Godfather to her daughter, T'Saara. Though, he is uncomfortable around children under the age of 10, he is humbled by the honor.

Now, the First Officer on the USS Montreal she had first contacted Toryn randomly over subspace when serving as Chief Engineer on the USS Veritas. Instantly they had a connection, her being half Human, half Al-Leyan. Toryn feel in love with Lael hard and has since frequently professed as such to her. While she also loves him, their vastly differing cultural upbringings have proven too much for Lael to handle and she has since broken off their relationship as well as his heart. They share a strangely unique psionic connection. Enabling them each to visit one another psychically in a psionic realm they both refer to as the Dreamscape. At present, Toryn has no clue why they are linked having never mated, and only met in person once. Despite the heartache, he loves her deeply and will always consider her a dear friend.

Upon her transfer to the USS Atlantis Toryn and her had a confrontation, verbal, though later on the holodeck they ended up coming to blows and venting a bit of their frustrations. Tensions between them have eased significantly and their friendship seems to have been maintained with the absence of any lingering romantic spark.

A recent addition to the USS Atlantis Doctor Journs is the first Al-Leyan that Toryn has served in Starfleet with and is only the second to serve on board the Atlantis since her relaunch in 2394. Ishka is also one of the few rare Al-Leyan's who possesses psionic abilities. In a short time Toryn and Ishka have grown close and after having endured several shared experiences on the ship, he has fallen in love with her. She is the complete and sole love of his life and a source of comfort and stability as he deals with the after effects of his lengthy torture and captivity at the hands of the Consortium. Ishka and Toryn have since moved into shared quarters and quite happy.

Background Information

Toryn was born in the southern polar region of Leya-l. A small mountainous expanse, Sez Toural. Unlike most of the rest of Leya-l, the polar regions were vastly colder climes. As a result, those that call the southern pole home tend to have fairer skin than those of their more northerly kin. As with all Al-Leyan children, upon birth he was taken into the custody of the Haemachuo caregivers and didn't not see his family until well after his tenth birthday. Toryn was set to have a bright future, as far as his early caregiver was concerned. The young lad showed an interest in other cultures and Astronomy early on. Nearing his tenth year, the caregivers, through the delicate and precise educational regimens placed upon him to that point had determined that he would best serve society in the Operations Prote (Branch). Upon being given this assigned class for the rest of his life he felt the strange and conflicting doubt. The stars called to him, as did the curiosity of other cultures. So much so that he became rebellious, 'confused' and voiced his desire to join the Science Prote. After months of being unable to sway his obviously troubled mind Toryn was sent to the Sez Toural Rehabilitation Center for treatment. Three weeks later the once conflicted boy came out with a new and vibrant excitement for the Operations Prote. After much deliberation and lengthy conversations with his blood family, whom he was now allowed to see for the first time, he settled on the Security Prote-Se. There was something about serving to protect others that appealed to him even before his 'rehabilitation'. Coincidentally it was during this time that his telepathic and empathic abilities were measured and put in his record. Classified as a T2/E0+.

Toryn fell into his studies quickly, seeking to become as proficient as he could in his Prote-se. Unlike many Al-Leyan children, he began to connect a deeper bond with his blood family than most. Though, not as strong as the bonds he'd made with his Haemachuo siblings, he came to be quite close with them all. Though, at least two of his blood sisters had long since joined Starfleet before he'd even knew of them. His father, Ket Talso was a first officer in the Al-Leyan military serving aboard a Ziela 7Ds Mark X Bird of Prey, the Rokuro.

During his free periods he would venture with his barely older blood sister for recreational scaling of the various towering mountains that surrounded his home.

In 2386, through his studious pursuit of his Prote-se he was granted a special internship to serve aboard the Rokuro as a member of her security team. The dispensation lasted for a year, until Toryn's continued run ins and flirtations with a human female serving at the Federation embassy on Leya-l caused him to be forcibly sent back to the Rehabilitation Center for so grievously falling from the branch he spent over seven months there before being released, now cured of his affliction in 2388.

Having been one of the rare cases of an Al-Leyan needing to undergo a second rehabilitation his application to Starfleet Academy was nearly not permitted to be sent. During a rather poignant meeting with the ruling council of Sez Toural, he pleaded with them to permit him to join Starfleet. Citing his educational merits, experience aboard the Rokuro and a passionate assurance that, because he had been adjusted twice now in his life he was no longer at risk of falling from the branch anymore.

The next few weeks were agonizing and he spent most of it in isolation out in the mountains he loved so much. Each and every crevice, cliff face, contour of wind eroded peak served to provide him solace.

Upon his return home, he was greeted by a bubbly Kiitiarel who was more than eager to give him the news that his application had not only been submitted, but he'd been accepted.

Toryn was overjoyed and with an almost zealous determination he resolved himself to push himself to excel. Before the young Al-Leyan ever set foot on Earth, he had decided to attempt a double major. Embracing his Prote, by pushing himself to complete both the Tactical and Security Prote-se.

The next five years would prove to be the hardest of his life, he met every challenge. Made a few moderately close relationships with fellow classmates and despite being surrounded by so many varying cultures he had not shown any sign of relapse.

2388 Accepted into Starfleet Academy. San Francisco, Earth.

During his second year, 2390, he and a few of his classmates became embroiled in a heated argument with upperclassmen that resulted in a rather chaotic brawl in one of the common areas. Toryn and four of his friends against six third and fourth year cadets. Despite his attempts to diffuse the situation from escalating, several punches were thrown along with a few cadets by Toryn himself. Both friend and in this case, foe alike he did everything he could to keep them off of one another. A selfless act which resulted in the Al-Leyan having to spend a few days in the infirmary for allowing himself to take the brunt of the blows himself. From both sides. He received both a disciplinary reprimand for his involvement and commendation for attempting to safeguard all parties to the detriment of himself.

2391 Earns the right to observe and participant in three weeks of Starfleet Marine Officer training. The ordeal gave him a new respect for those serving in that particular Prote-sede. (secondary sub branch)

2392 Undergoes Cadet Cruise, upon completion volunteers for a second Cadet cruise.

2393 Begins Second Cadet Cruise.

239410.03 Graduates from the Academy at the rank of Ensign.

239501.17 Promoted to Lieutenant JG.

239504.24 Promoted to Lieutenant

239510.31 Promoted to Lieutenant Commander


Al-Leyan Military

  • Rankuro Security

Starfleet Academy 2388-2394

  • Core Classes
  • Security: Major
  • Tactical: Major

Service History

Service History
Insignia Rank Dates Posting Assignment
Cadet 4th Class 2388-2389 Starfleet Academy Cadet
Cadet 3rd Class 2389-2390 Starfleet Academy Cadet
Cadet 2nd Class 2390-2391 Starfleet Academy Cadet
Cadet 1st Class 2391-239410.04 Starfleet Academy Cadet
Ensign 239410.04 USS Athena USS Atlantis Security
Lieutenant JG 239501.17 USS Atlantis Security
Lieutenant 239504.24 USS Atlantis Chief of Security and Tactical
Lieutenant Commander 239510.31 USS Atlantis Chief of Security and Tactical
Major 239511.03 USS Atlantis Acting Marine Commanding Officer
Lieutenant Commander 239511.03 USS Atlantis Mission Specialist
Lieutenant Commander 239709.01 USS Chin'toka Second Officer/Strategic Operation Response Team Leader

Awards & Service Ribbons

Awards and Service Ribbons
Award Name Date/Assignment Citation
Awards General ScottyCross 2011.jpg
Scotty Cross 239706.27
USS Atlantis
The Scotty Cross is given to an officer who shows extreme creativity while solving a plot dilemma or in-character plot twist.
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B-Plot Award 239706.27
USS Atlantis
The B-Plot Award is presented to those players who go the extra light year to showcase elements of their character’s lives despite the demands of the main plotlines. It is a tricky balancing act to further both a story arc and character development but when a player gets it right, a character becomes three-dimensional, vital and jumps right off of the page.
Awards General 1Year.jpg
1-year Member 239607.01
USS Atlantis
The 1-year Member award is a length of service award given to those who have been members continuously for one year.
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Khan Award 239607.01
USS Atlantis
The Khan Award is a general award and is awarded to a simmer who thoughtfully develops a three-dimensional villain over the course of a mission or more.
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TOSMA 239607.01
USS Atlantis
The Order of Starfleet Merit and Achievement First Class (TOSMA) is a general award given to members who show great dedication in their behavior, and simming abilities. A candidate for TOSMA I regularly contributes good, solid ideas to the plot and character development. They also take the time to edit and proof-read their sims to ensure quality in their writing.
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Lwaxana Troi Medallion 239606.30
USS Atlantis
This award is given to a member who takes on a unique and non-traditional role outside of the normal Starfleet positions, while creating a colorful and engaging character such as, but not limited to: diplomat, civilian or mission specialist.
Awards General SheathedSword 2011.jpg
Sheathed Sword 239506.26
USS Atlantis
The Sheathed Sword is a general award and is presented to those to decide to inflict mental and/or physical trauma on their character, and then dive into the resulting emotions and choices in a realistic manner. The name comes from a line in a Robert Jordan book where a warrior must be prepared to 'sheath the sword' in his own body, i.e. take a grievous wound to achieve one's goal (in this case, more realistic simming) as opposed to an actual goal of the character.
Service Ribbon Name Date/Assignment Citation
Awards ServiceRibbons Graduate.jpg
Starfleet Academy Graduate Ribbon 239410.03
Starfleet Academy
Awarded to those who have graduated from Starfleet Academy.
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Legacy Ribbon 239501.17
USS Atlantis
Awarded to an individual who has served during the reactivation and assignment of an existing vessel or installation to a new mission.
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Captain's Commendation 239501.17
USS Atlantis
Awarded to a person for exemplary service and/or honorable actions performed in the course of his/her duties, when that service is deemed worthy of formal recognition by his/her commanding officer.
Awards ServiceRibbons PurpleHeart 2011.jpg
Purple Heart 239504.24
USS Atlantis
Grievously wounded during unwarranted and unprovoked ambush of the Atlantis by spider and humanoid robots of unknown affiliation. Comatose for nearly three weeks.
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Legion of Merit 239504.24
USS Atlantis
Awarded to a person who has distinguished himself or herself by exceptionally meritorious conduct in the performance of outstanding services and achievements.
Awards ServiceRibbons PurpleHeart 2011.jpg
Purple Heart 239508.08
USS Atlantis
Wounded while recovering Taventa cargo ship undergoing illegal mining operations on Lydor IV.
Awards ServiceRibbons GoodConduct 2011.jpg
Good Conduct Ribbon 239508.08
USS Atlantis
Awarded for recovering Taventa cargo ship undergoing illegal mining operations on Lydor IV.
Awards ServiceRibbons LifesavingBasic 2011.jpg
Lifesaving Ribbon 239510.31
USS Atlantis
Awarded for participation in the rescue of not one, but multiple Korri freighters and their crew that had been damaged and trapped within the Jenatris cloud.
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Department Chief Ribbon 239510.31
USS Atlantis
Awarded for serving as Tactical and Security Chief for well over six months and doing so with distinction.
Awards ServiceRibbons PurpleHeart 2011.jpg
Purple Heart 239605.27
USS Atlantis
Awarded for being wounded while recovering Captain Brell from a Consortium trap and sacrificing his own well being to do so.
Awards ServiceRibbons POW 2011.jpg
Prisoner of War Ribbon 239605.27
USS Atlantis
Awarded for being captured and held captive for a month by Consortium agents and enduring the torture the subjected him to.
Awards ServiceRibbons FederationCross 2011.jpg
Federation Cross 239605.27
USS Atlantis
Awarded for saving the life of his Captain with no knowledge or expectation of being rescued, and subsequently sacrificing himself to do so without hesitation.
Awards ServiceRibbons JointMeritoriousUnit 2011.jpg
Joint Meritorious Unit Award 239608.28
USS Atlantis
Awarded for keeping multiple away teams in communication and rendering assistance as needed while in the Jenatris Cloud during the ships exploration of several previously unknown Chon outposts/stations.
Awards ServiceRibbons Peacekeeper 2011.jpg
Peacekeeper Service Ribbon 239612.03
USS Atlantis
Awarded for taking charge and providing relief aid to Caraadians on Paldor II when their emergency services were stretched thin due to the catastrophe.
Awards ServiceRibbons Commendation.jpg
Captain's Commendation 239612.03
USS Atlantis
Awarded for rushing into a collapsing building to save a crewmate and in doing so discovering a Valcarian Spy, as well as imposing himself in front of a stampede of wild animals to save two Caraadians, when they rushed the triage tents.
Awards ServiceRibbons JointMeritoriousUnit 2011.jpg
Joint Meritorious Unit Award 239612.03
USS Atlantis
Awarded for providing relief aid to Caraadian civilians during a mass casualty catastrophe caused by the appearance of Deep Space 26 in orbit of the planet Paldor II.
Order of Merit of House Larokon 239612.03
USS Atlantis
Awarded by the Grand Council of House Larokon for coming to the aid of the citizens of Paldor II, effectively saving their planet from extensive destruction.
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Maiden Voyage Ribbon 239701.21
USS Juneau
Awarded for serving as Chief Security officer on the Juneau's maiden and test flight voyage.
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Project Capstone Ribbon 239701.21
USS Juneau
Awarded for participation with Project Capstone on the USS Juneau during the test voyage for the Warp XV Engine.
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Warp XV Drive Pioneer 239701.21
USS Juneau
Awarded for participation with Project Capstone on the USS Juneau during the test voyage for the Warp XV Engine.
Awards ServiceRibbons LegionOfMerit 2011.jpg
Legion of Merit 239701.21
USS Juneau
Awarded to the crew of the Juneau for their consistent steadfastness in facing the many obstacles and challenges Project Capstone presented. And seeing the Juneau safely home.
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Orion Syndicate Service Medal 239701.21
USS Juneau
Awarded for participation with Project Capstone on the USS Juneau during which he and the crew repeatedly thwarted efforts by the syndicate to steal the Juneau and/or her prototype engine. Including the defeat of a Syndicate Cruiser.
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Good Conduct Ribbon 239704.07
USS Atlantis
Awarded for rendering aid to Valcarian medical personnel during a mistaken viral pandemic that was actually extensive metal poisoning.
Awards ServiceRibbons Commendation.jpg
Captain's Commendation 239704.07
USS Atlantis
Awarded for coming to the rescue of his fellow shipmates while they were under fire and being pursued by hostile Valcarian special forces.

USS Chin'toka

NPC Listing   ·   USS Chin'toka Crew Manifest   ·   Crew History
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Commanding Ofc.
First Officer
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Chief Helmsman
Cadfael Peters
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Mission Specialist
Lael Rosek
Chief Medical Ofc.
Elizabeth Snow
Ship's Counsellor
Freki Azorius
Chief Engineer
Chief of Operations
Esa Kiax
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Chief Tac/Sec
Toryn Raga
Tac/Sec Officer
Amuro McKnight
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Chief Science Ofc.
Noa T. Levinson
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Science Officer
Charmaine Ning
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