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 * '''Ambitions and Goals''': A large family, and completing his training at the Academy
 * '''Achievements in Life''': Being accepted to Starfleet academy.
-* '''Disappointments in Life''': Not being linked to at least one female yet.
+* '''Disappointments in Life''': Being away from his large family.
 * '''Temperment''': Very Outgoing and gregarious
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-Growing up in a large Bolian family Bran felt the love and care from so many people focused on him. It helped him to grow into a confident friendly person. The adjustment to academy life was rough at first, with so few people around but he magnates to always find ways to surround himself with friendly faces to help him succeed.
+Growing up in a large Bolian family Bran felt the love and care from so many people focused on him. It helped him to grow into a confident friendly person. The adjustment to academy life was rough at first, with so few people around but he manages to always find ways to surround himself with friendly faces to help him succeed.
-The one regret he has is to not have yet found a female to start his own large family with yet and create the same loving atmosphere he grew up in. However with his time at the academy growing to a close Bran knows that the adventure is beginning and there are many ways family can be viewed.
+However with his time at the academy growing to a close Bran knows that the adventure is beginning and there are many ways family can be viewed.